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10/12/2020 c1 Shisui
It is so good ️️️️️️️️️️
1/30/2020 c1 Devilman360
I like the story it we good.
5/2/2019 c1 Guest
Beautiful story here. I love the Strider games
4/5/2019 c1 60Perseus12
Ha! Serves them (Konoha) right for being sore loser! Well done, Naruto! *Thumbs UP!*
4/5/2019 c1 kage88
god one
4/4/2019 c1 LoamyCoffee
This was good.
4/4/2019 c1 PoetSamurai
I liked the intention and the two premises, but I felt this was just one big rushed summary as opposed to a story. I feel like I just watched a recap while waiting for the real thing to start.

Don't get me wrong, it's creative, but very dry. No dialogue and the flimsy 'manipulative old man wastes too much resources trying to turn an untrained weapon into a trump card when nearly any trained ninja can do the job' is incredibly weak and overused.

Not trying to flame, it's just you kind of shot yourself in the foot trying to condense an entirely big premise like a StriderxNaruto crossover into 8.5k words. If there were actual fleshed out characters with dialogue and backgrounds and deep, non-shallow problems, it would have been amazing.

For now though it was an entertaining 5 minutes of reading what feels like the summary of what could have been a good story.
4/4/2019 c1 SPark681
Damn what a story this was I truly enjoyed it anyways keep up the great work!
4/4/2019 c1 BANKAIZEN
this one-shot is awesome
4/4/2019 c1 Autismguy593
Awesome, I love your work man. keep up the good work.
4/4/2019 c1 zero fullbuster
Love the story.
Please update your stories soon.

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