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6/20/2019 c2 Flying Raijin
good chapter! seems to be an interesting story.

ah, you actually know the colour of Naruto's chakra! not many people on this site do, I think
6/18/2019 c2 chaosshadow19
Well this seems kinda interesting.

This is the pretty much the only Naruto fanfic or crossover where Naruto is actually a real character.

And not the emo overpowered Mary sue. The fandom loves to wank at.

Naruto actually acts somewhat like his canon counterpart in this fanfic. And has actual limitations and flaws like a real person.

Whereas in literally every other Naruto fanfic. Naruto is turned into a edgelord Mary sue with god like powers.

So credit to you for making the first good Naruto fanfic where Naruto is actually relatable.

Warning.

Ignore any Narutards who are going to throw a tantrum in the review section about how everyone should suck Naruto's dick and how he apparently has god like powers. Because there at going to be a lot of toxic Naruto fans coming here to troll and throw a tantrum.

Your fanfic is fine the way it is and is far better than any other Naruto fanfic.

The story seems good.

Though I question why on earth Makarov and Minato would be at odds. Especially Kushina of all people hating Makarov. Seems odd. Since they are all the good guys.
4/10/2019 c1 1pikapikachu4291
nice story

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