for Fifty Shades Better Man2/27 c20 Tal
Awesome. Please hurry up with an update. Please.
Awesome. Please hurry up with an update. Please.
8/20/2022 c20 myPhiladelphia
At the start I had a problem to read you story, because f. E. you had one sentence in three paragraphs... But the story was great and you paragraphs improved. :)
What I don't like is, thay you mixed Sawyer/Mia story in this storyline... It's a different story and why to mix it?
Hope you wll continue one day, but I prefer C/A storyline...
At the start I had a problem to read you story, because f. E. you had one sentence in three paragraphs... But the story was great and you paragraphs improved. :)
What I don't like is, thay you mixed Sawyer/Mia story in this storyline... It's a different story and why to mix it?
Hope you wll continue one day, but I prefer C/A storyline...
7/16/2021 c20 Linda Dockery
Oh my goodness absolutely love this story please come back and finish it . Need to know how Christian liked his surprise birthday party. I love how Ana is making everyday and everything so special and exciting for Christian so they have great memories to look back on
Hope life is treating you and yours well
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and imagination with us
Oh my goodness absolutely love this story please come back and finish it . Need to know how Christian liked his surprise birthday party. I love how Ana is making everyday and everything so special and exciting for Christian so they have great memories to look back on
Hope life is treating you and yours well
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and imagination with us
2/25/2021 c1 Dee Lishous
This app doesn't give the whole story...if you google search this story and it comes up on fanfiction it will give you the story in its entirety...I don't know why the app doesn't do that..
This app doesn't give the whole story...if you google search this story and it comes up on fanfiction it will give you the story in its entirety...I don't know why the app doesn't do that..
10/5/2020 c19 Guest
Please update
Please update
10/4/2020 c20 Kimberly972
Please will you be coming back to update this story it’s so wonderful and different. I love it.
Please will you be coming back to update this story it’s so wonderful and different. I love it.
5/21/2020 c20 Denie1943
GREAT! This is just right. Thanks for sharing. Now I'm anxious to get back to the birthday party. Thanks for sharing! Stay well...
GREAT! This is just right. Thanks for sharing. Now I'm anxious to get back to the birthday party. Thanks for sharing! Stay well...
5/21/2020 c16 Denie1943
GOOD! This can be just the wake up that Mia needs. Thanks for sharing! Stay well!
GOOD! This can be just the wake up that Mia needs. Thanks for sharing! Stay well!
5/21/2020 c11 Denie1943
A lovely chapter and the joke on brother Elliot was fabulous. I am really into your version of C&A. It is wonderful to read such a sweet story without tons of angst. Thanks for sharing and please stay safe. This virus is nothing to play with.
A lovely chapter and the joke on brother Elliot was fabulous. I am really into your version of C&A. It is wonderful to read such a sweet story without tons of angst. Thanks for sharing and please stay safe. This virus is nothing to play with.