for The First Instinct7/3 c11 Doctor MisFire
I have not read a Doctor Who Fanfic in about a decade. Your writing is so incredible that it's made me fall in love with the Fandom all over again. I hope you continue this story and every other one that you write.
I have not read a Doctor Who Fanfic in about a decade. Your writing is so incredible that it's made me fall in love with the Fandom all over again. I hope you continue this story and every other one that you write.
10/22/2019 c10 
5Black-Sakura-44
Soooo good! I can’t wait to see what happens next! I love how you are rehashing the episodes in a way that gives a general sense of the episodic story without retelling it word for word. I also like how things are slowly but surely changing in regards to the episodes themselves, the characters and their interactions with each other. I’m interested to see when you cover the impossible planet if the Doctor will be able to leave Rose to go down into the pit. Anyways fantastic job so far! I can’t wait to read the next chapter!
5Black-Sakura-44Soooo good! I can’t wait to see what happens next! I love how you are rehashing the episodes in a way that gives a general sense of the episodic story without retelling it word for word. I also like how things are slowly but surely changing in regards to the episodes themselves, the characters and their interactions with each other. I’m interested to see when you cover the impossible planet if the Doctor will be able to leave Rose to go down into the pit. Anyways fantastic job so far! I can’t wait to read the next chapter!
7/13/2019 c10 9Miriam Who
Wonderful chapter! I wonder what is happening with Rose and how things will play out for the Doctor in Pete's world.
9Miriam WhoWonderful chapter! I wonder what is happening with Rose and how things will play out for the Doctor in Pete's world.
6/1/2019 c9 Nomaad
This just keeps on getting better, the conflicting emotions in the Doctor is the best thing I have read in a while. And I have been lately been reading my old favorite Doctor Who fics.
This just keeps on getting better, the conflicting emotions in the Doctor is the best thing I have read in a while. And I have been lately been reading my old favorite Doctor Who fics.
5/28/2019 c8 Wings of Dawn
This is some great set-up for the next episode! Same results, but with different process and motivations that might make all the difference.
This is some great set-up for the next episode! Same results, but with different process and motivations that might make all the difference.
5/20/2019 c7 55NewDrWhoFan
I do enjoy the insights, but I have to be honest: I am chomping at the bit for some more concrete changes to the episodes ;-) (Specifically Doctor/Rose changes...)
-NDWF
55NewDrWhoFanI do enjoy the insights, but I have to be honest: I am chomping at the bit for some more concrete changes to the episodes ;-) (Specifically Doctor/Rose changes...)
-NDWF
5/11/2019 c2 Guest
Good
Good
4/26/2019 c4 14April Dawn Irene
I worry that this might turn out to be too much of a text version of episodes and yet I continue reading, because there are too few decent fics exploring the Doctor's seemingly intense feelings for Rose. Please continue.
14April Dawn IreneI worry that this might turn out to be too much of a text version of episodes and yet I continue reading, because there are too few decent fics exploring the Doctor's seemingly intense feelings for Rose. Please continue.