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7/20/2019 c9 1ILiekFishes
This was the best chapter yet.
1. Now I don’t know if Naofumi just uncovered the ENTIRE Illuminati or if hindsight is 20/20, but it’s gotta be one or the other, and either way that was badass.
2. Malty is surprisingly tolerable when she’s on your side. I think she maybe kinda might like 1% be staying with Naofumi for altruistic reasons. Baby steps.
3. The cage beastman is cool and is making me question the meaning of free will even more. When he gets out of this cage, all he’ll be doing is getting a bigger one
Great work
7/20/2019 c9 7The Sinful
Random thought but it might take Naofumi longer to unlock his cursed series since unlike canon, he didn't have the start of it on his second day.

Even though Malty's a sociopath, even sociopaths can form bonds with those close to them. They still don't give a damn about the average person though. And yes, being smart doesn't mean you don't fuck up. It can mean you fuck up more if you're too aware of your intelligence. One of the worst I've seen (in fiction) almost resulted in the near complete genocide of caucasians.
7/20/2019 c9 starburst98
Hmmm, so was it the queen, or is the king being infected by the devil in this time line making him just stupid enough to try this?
7/20/2019 c3 3code R.R
Oh god he showed his crazy this is...damn there really isn't a good alternative!
7/20/2019 c9 6Pretty Lazy
And with every step, Naofumi learns more. And with ecery chapter, we see how much maturity these characters are handled by you.

This type of storytelling always pull me in, no matter how long I would have to wait for a chapter. The fact that you worked with a character who was glossed over with a few sentences in the parallel chapter of the original had my attention.

We may not see Farkas anymore, but he was a character that lived and breathed through the brief moment that he had. Though, it doesn’t matter if we see him again or not, his impact has already been set.

Another great chapter, Qinlongfei. I’ll wait eagerly for the next chapter, regardless of how long you take.
7/20/2019 c9 Guest
Good chapter. I particularly like Naofumi's shining moments... like extrapolating the various statements to arrive at two pretty well drawn out conclusions... surprising even Malty...

I have to sort of wonder how this is going to play out long term, and am looking forward to reading it.

Malty is playing a very dangerous balancing act, and the cards could all come falling down at a single instance of recognition, or when Naofumi meets either queen or shadow, if she does not play it just right.

The other thing... she is being forced to both play this role, and be exposed to his own smarts... I have to wonder how much that is going to really be changing her own outlook and reform her somewhat.
7/20/2019 c1 3code R.R
I will admit the discord recommended me this story and so far I like it. I do wonder what will happen to her in the end but let's see
7/20/2019 c9 5Pyromania101
Hmm, a bit much on the internal monologuing side, but that's not really a problem in a fic like this. Looking forward to how Malty interacts with Raphy and later Filo. I'd hazard to guess she'll probably find the latter more annoying, and alternate between wanting to pluck her feathers or tan her ass; as for Raphy, the little tanuki will probably be treated with caution in the event that Malty realizes that the girl isn't stupid. But that's just my guess. I'm not you, nor do I know what you're planning.
7/20/2019 c9 2KiroZen
All the politicking is making my head hurt.
Now imagine if the characters not native to Earth found out what video games were and why super heroes were a big deal.
If they got the references from the "other worlders" so to speak.
7/10/2019 c6 KiroZen
Issue with not outing yourself is he kinda already knows you're one of the co-conspirators.
You really aren't as subtle as you believe.
7/7/2019 c8 Guest1
I guess either she's still gonna be internally cold towards Filo and Ralphtalia, or slowly she warms up to them, and change perspective of other races. Like "She's just a filthy..." Ralphtalia smiles "disgusting..."
"Thank you big sister Myne"

"Agh! How can anyone hate something this cute?!"

Nah maybe it's too hopeful for it to happened, but would make one hell of an omake.
7/7/2019 c8 40lord Martiya
Quite happy to see Malty is still on top of her game... And had a good laugh when the Ravens were exposed for what they actually were.
7/6/2019 c8 Guest
please continue
7/5/2019 c6 1fractalman
HAH! Better Blush-inducing rumors about using monsters for love life than much much worse, hahah!
7/5/2019 c7 Guest
Awesome chapter! I would love to see a change of a heart for Malty as time progresses. Maybe she could be friendly towards raphtalia and filo.
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