for A Gamer In South Blue5/26 c47 
2Kair Phree
Please don’t listen to any of the naysayer out there. Your story is amazing and it really does the characters you portray justice. I love this story and always look forward to the next chapter. It always brings a smile to my face when the Next button is working again. Please keep trucking on! I’d love to see where this story goes!
2Kair PhreePlease don’t listen to any of the naysayer out there. Your story is amazing and it really does the characters you portray justice. I love this story and always look forward to the next chapter. It always brings a smile to my face when the Next button is working again. Please keep trucking on! I’d love to see where this story goes!
5/20 c24 Joke
I have to say, this story became really boring since the fight against the Kid pirates, the author drag the south blue arc way too much. The mc is just beating the shit of random pirates left and right, pirates that no one care to read about... This story is stagnant, nothing even remotely interesting happened for quite a long time, the story must really quickly move to the Grand Line arc.
I have to say, this story became really boring since the fight against the Kid pirates, the author drag the south blue arc way too much. The mc is just beating the shit of random pirates left and right, pirates that no one care to read about... This story is stagnant, nothing even remotely interesting happened for quite a long time, the story must really quickly move to the Grand Line arc.
5/21 c47 MegaDriveCD
I've been wondering... now that Jack is a Shichibukai, is there a chance that a Seraphim of him will be created? i believe that would be a really cool thing and Jack's reaction to being essentially cloned would be hilarious. Actually would the seraphim have the system or something like that? hell, are the perks Jack gains imbued in his body/DNA in a way that when cloned the clone will have them? because a seraphim or jack with no perks would def be useless (no offense to jack)
I've been wondering... now that Jack is a Shichibukai, is there a chance that a Seraphim of him will be created? i believe that would be a really cool thing and Jack's reaction to being essentially cloned would be hilarious. Actually would the seraphim have the system or something like that? hell, are the perks Jack gains imbued in his body/DNA in a way that when cloned the clone will have them? because a seraphim or jack with no perks would def be useless (no offense to jack)
5/19 c47 Guest
I hope jack find gets his hands on goro goro no mi. Enel by now is probably in moon but one can hope. Its THE coolest fruit in the verse in my opinion
I hope jack find gets his hands on goro goro no mi. Enel by now is probably in moon but one can hope. Its THE coolest fruit in the verse in my opinion
5/12 c47 Valler
The organization created so that the celestial dragons may continue to squeeze the world for every resource their hearts desire is... stingy? Oh, say it ain't so
The organization created so that the celestial dragons may continue to squeeze the world for every resource their hearts desire is... stingy? Oh, say it ain't so
5/12 c46 Valler
Yah, in hindsight it's easy to tell that Croco-boyo was introduced far too early for the power scaling to ever make sense. At least he went out with a bang o7
Yah, in hindsight it's easy to tell that Croco-boyo was introduced far too early for the power scaling to ever make sense. At least he went out with a bang o7
5/1 c47 Guest
Never seen One Piece but this is really really good I might actually watch/read it now if I have the time.
Never seen One Piece but this is really really good I might actually watch/read it now if I have the time.
4/30 c34 ShineX
I mean you'd have to expecting those things when you came in at this point lol. Still, way to make a statement.
I mean you'd have to expecting those things when you came in at this point lol. Still, way to make a statement.
4/30 c31 ShineX
Lets face it, this was going to happen sooner or later. The same reason you can't morally join the marines is the same reason they'd turn on you at even the slightest threat towards them.
Lets face it, this was going to happen sooner or later. The same reason you can't morally join the marines is the same reason they'd turn on you at even the slightest threat towards them.