for The Ultimate Assistant1/23/2020 c8 Guest
This book is so good please update but no rush
This book is so good please update but no rush
11/22/2019 c8 Guest
If this story took a different direction I think maizono could be a yandere but I don’t think that’ll happen. (Oh yeah n update, this is my favorite fic rn)
If this story took a different direction I think maizono could be a yandere but I don’t think that’ll happen. (Oh yeah n update, this is my favorite fic rn)
11/16/2019 c8 JDZ
Ok so I managed to continue reading the rest while still waiting for your next chapter. The last one gave me cliffhangers, I really want to know what happens after now that we're going to see another possible breakdown and rift on Sayaka's personality. I didn't really expect her to be actually more possessive than I thought, it gives me the idea that she may be a yandere in this fic, but who knows, you're basically god here so you're the one who knows what's at the end.
The characters are still more fleshed out than ever, storyline is moving at a good pace, mysteries are still... mysterious, but are actually quirky and engaging. As I mentioned before with the chapter ending on a cliffhanger, I am excited to see your future updates! Thank you for your hard work and content!
Ok so I managed to continue reading the rest while still waiting for your next chapter. The last one gave me cliffhangers, I really want to know what happens after now that we're going to see another possible breakdown and rift on Sayaka's personality. I didn't really expect her to be actually more possessive than I thought, it gives me the idea that she may be a yandere in this fic, but who knows, you're basically god here so you're the one who knows what's at the end.
The characters are still more fleshed out than ever, storyline is moving at a good pace, mysteries are still... mysterious, but are actually quirky and engaging. As I mentioned before with the chapter ending on a cliffhanger, I am excited to see your future updates! Thank you for your hard work and content!
11/9/2019 c3 SC11
Hmmm... Did you do some changes in terms of Sayaka's psychic abilities? It seems to me as if she barely or she doesn't have it given on how natural she responded to accusations towards her. And the fact that she can't even seem to be sure of whatever Makoto is thinking after he said that at the end, but nonetheless she still took it as the truth. Anyways, aside from this, her surviving and having an interactionthis is a nice change of view towards her character. I also liked how Makoto's character changed as well from being too much a pacifist in canon. Honestly, I feel somehow relieved to see Sayaka's character when the class trial rules were explained. Despite being canon divergent, I do believe this would be her reaction/response if the class trial rules were explained to her. It feels like some kind of burden or dead weight was lifted. Overall, the chapter was well written and made, or maybe I just forgot some of the mistakes, but either way, it feels that way. With this, I'll be continuing reading the next few chapters while also enthusiastically waiting for your next future updates with this fic. Thank you for your hard work!
Hmmm... Did you do some changes in terms of Sayaka's psychic abilities? It seems to me as if she barely or she doesn't have it given on how natural she responded to accusations towards her. And the fact that she can't even seem to be sure of whatever Makoto is thinking after he said that at the end, but nonetheless she still took it as the truth. Anyways, aside from this, her surviving and having an interactionthis is a nice change of view towards her character. I also liked how Makoto's character changed as well from being too much a pacifist in canon. Honestly, I feel somehow relieved to see Sayaka's character when the class trial rules were explained. Despite being canon divergent, I do believe this would be her reaction/response if the class trial rules were explained to her. It feels like some kind of burden or dead weight was lifted. Overall, the chapter was well written and made, or maybe I just forgot some of the mistakes, but either way, it feels that way. With this, I'll be continuing reading the next few chapters while also enthusiastically waiting for your next future updates with this fic. Thank you for your hard work!
11/7/2019 c5 JDZ
It's almost as if somebody was also playing Ace Attorney~ The way how others have retorted during an argument (before or during trial debates), I couldn't help but see similarities. Well, at least that's just what I think. Great work on translating the trial debate into texts tho (despite being actual texts in-game). I actually loved the idea getting Sayaka to play as the main character in the early trial debates, especially when she said "No, you've got that wrong!". I love imagining her saying that with her unique sprite. It's also quite nice to see her being present in a class trial, despite being deceased in canon. This is the only fic that I read which actually featured her in a class trial and have her participate in the debate. A lot of fics centralized on her (or not) didn't tackle this concept as they were basically au or avoided the class trials completely.
Other than that, the development between Sayaka and Makoto's relationship also gave me a sigh of relief. I damn felt too well that kind of depression Sayaka was carrying at for almost 2-3 chapters. Nonetheless, I hope to see more from what you had in store for them.
To be frank tho, I did not expect Kyoko to have that kind of character in this fic. I must say, it's quite well made. It helps get rid of the idea that she is just purely expressionless or boring. Makoto as well, but ARGHHH I DONT HAVE TIME TO REDO THIS PARAGRAPH- ITS GETTING LATER AFTER MIDNIGHT NOW AND I STILL HAVE CLASSES TOM-LATER AFTER2HOURS. Anyways, bottomline I still wanted to add more, but great job. You're welcome! Pls more. Goodmornight!
It's almost as if somebody was also playing Ace Attorney~ The way how others have retorted during an argument (before or during trial debates), I couldn't help but see similarities. Well, at least that's just what I think. Great work on translating the trial debate into texts tho (despite being actual texts in-game). I actually loved the idea getting Sayaka to play as the main character in the early trial debates, especially when she said "No, you've got that wrong!". I love imagining her saying that with her unique sprite. It's also quite nice to see her being present in a class trial, despite being deceased in canon. This is the only fic that I read which actually featured her in a class trial and have her participate in the debate. A lot of fics centralized on her (or not) didn't tackle this concept as they were basically au or avoided the class trials completely.
Other than that, the development between Sayaka and Makoto's relationship also gave me a sigh of relief. I damn felt too well that kind of depression Sayaka was carrying at for almost 2-3 chapters. Nonetheless, I hope to see more from what you had in store for them.
To be frank tho, I did not expect Kyoko to have that kind of character in this fic. I must say, it's quite well made. It helps get rid of the idea that she is just purely expressionless or boring. Makoto as well, but ARGHHH I DONT HAVE TIME TO REDO THIS PARAGRAPH- ITS GETTING LATER AFTER MIDNIGHT NOW AND I STILL HAVE CLASSES TOM-LATER AFTER2HOURS. Anyways, bottomline I still wanted to add more, but great job. You're welcome! Pls more. Goodmornight!
10/7/2019 c8 Guest
Great work once again, I am loving what you are doing with this.
Great work once again, I am loving what you are doing with this.
10/1/2019 c8 
20TellThemNaegi
Makoto's so fucking stupid. But he has his charm. Let's hope he gets Hina feeling better.
Leon's acting pretty creepy. I've almost no doubt Monokuma's involved. I can easily see him spilling that Sayaka was planning to murder him. Maybe even got Makoto in on it.
20TellThemNaegiMakoto's so fucking stupid. But he has his charm. Let's hope he gets Hina feeling better.
Leon's acting pretty creepy. I've almost no doubt Monokuma's involved. I can easily see him spilling that Sayaka was planning to murder him. Maybe even got Makoto in on it.
10/1/2019 c8 liculle
I don't think this chapter is boring at all. I think you're doing a good job keeping up this sense of suspense at how things will play out with how you're showing Sayaka's inner turmoil. Good stuff and keep it up :)
I don't think this chapter is boring at all. I think you're doing a good job keeping up this sense of suspense at how things will play out with how you're showing Sayaka's inner turmoil. Good stuff and keep it up :)
9/30/2019 c8 Guest
Cool story ! More please
Cool story ! More please
9/29/2019 c8 Western-Otaku
Awesome to see a new chapter so soon! Ah fair enough, having no internet access for a bit will probably have an impact haha.
That stuff about Leon sounds pretty ominous, let's hope Makoto or someone else can help Sayaka out. Keep it up!
Awesome to see a new chapter so soon! Ah fair enough, having no internet access for a bit will probably have an impact haha.
That stuff about Leon sounds pretty ominous, let's hope Makoto or someone else can help Sayaka out. Keep it up!
9/29/2019 c8 3Jpach07
Byakuya being Byakuya, because it doesn't surprise me... Damn guy with a golden cane stuck in his ass...
And poor Maizono, left before the pseudo punk, and above with his problems... Although I hope that Naegi has been able to help Hina-chan a little with her grief (I love the girl, I love her relationship with Naegi, and... It's my favorite crackship, supported by the brothers effect in AE. XD)
3Jpach07Byakuya being Byakuya, because it doesn't surprise me... Damn guy with a golden cane stuck in his ass...
And poor Maizono, left before the pseudo punk, and above with his problems... Although I hope that Naegi has been able to help Hina-chan a little with her grief (I love the girl, I love her relationship with Naegi, and... It's my favorite crackship, supported by the brothers effect in AE. XD)
9/28/2019 c8 doomqwer
see you did a quad update i would read the rest of them but this was the shortest and i really aught to be going to bed i shall read and review the rest of these later
and i am really enjoying this story showing human insecurities in sayaka showing how fragile the girl is even after building herself back up it really humanizes her and make it easier to empathize with
see you did a quad update i would read the rest of them but this was the shortest and i really aught to be going to bed i shall read and review the rest of these later
and i am really enjoying this story showing human insecurities in sayaka showing how fragile the girl is even after building herself back up it really humanizes her and make it easier to empathize with
9/25/2019 c7 basemynick
*review review review review REVIEW REVIEW* I read that bit at the end and thought "I'll review later when I have a sec" and then forgot about it for who knows how long...
I like how things ended up with kyoko, makoto and sayaka. even if the girls are giving evil eyes to each other they know they're still on the same team.
*review review review review REVIEW REVIEW* I read that bit at the end and thought "I'll review later when I have a sec" and then forgot about it for who knows how long...
I like how things ended up with kyoko, makoto and sayaka. even if the girls are giving evil eyes to each other they know they're still on the same team.
9/15/2019 c7 Western-Otaku
Excuse me if I sound like a petulant child... BUT I NEED MORE!
Ahem... Great job on this story, I had a lot of fun reading it and can't wait to see more updates in the future. Hope you definitely keep at it!
Excuse me if I sound like a petulant child... BUT I NEED MORE!
Ahem... Great job on this story, I had a lot of fun reading it and can't wait to see more updates in the future. Hope you definitely keep at it!