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5/19 c16 Guest
If krieg ends up fighting one of them they are going up end up killing them unless sane Krieg holds him back also I don’t think krieg has any weaknesses not counting gameplay
5/15 c16 Wolfeborn
I love the story in the characters and I can’t wait for more
5/9 c15 Wolfeborn
I just found this story and love it so I hope more comes eventually
3/28 c1 Quantum qwazi
i’m not sure what was rewritten but but you might want to try again
bakugo is even more of half assed caricature then he is in mhz screaming at him makes sense for the charecter. snatching up his neck and suffocating him in the middle of class is retarded. beyond the charecter bakugo has no super strength making the action stupidly impossible the entire first scene almost needs to be removed
it adds nothing to the story at all. all it does is prove you need to think through you fight scenes more
3/28 c1 Quantum qwazi
ok so what a teacher just told a student off for scratching his neck wtf thats nonsense not a big deal but that’s a bad first piece of dialogue
2/11 c4 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
You mangled zer0's haiku speech
1/16 c14 Guest
Ouch. Poor Izuku.
1/16 c14 LegendaryMob
hope izuku went with avoiding route. i don't really feel like Izuku is ready for any feeling confrontation any time soon. also i kinda wanna see how they'll react being avoided by him.
11/8/2020 c11 Pater P0n
Unas anus unas anus unas anus!
11/3/2020 c5 Draconic Reborn
this thing is a mess the grammar is good and the idea is fine but your story is rushed and doesn't flow to great, not to mention its all over the place.
10/31/2020 c11 Karlos1234ify
Outstanding
9/20/2020 c11 5SuperSonic64
that 'I'm a young adult, it's what we do.' line is the best.
8/15/2020 c10 redwolf23456
Great story so far
8/2/2020 c9 2ProjectIceman
Initializing...tracking location of author...
8/2/2020 c8 ProjectIceman
Uhh wow. Hope Fuyumis okay. And shes stronger than her father lol
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