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2wsbenge
Different kind of story where Harry dies, and stays dead. Normally he would have, since he survived on luck
Natural progression of Game of Thrones is that humanity goes extinct.
The Queen stays in charge.
Thank you.
2wsbengeDifferent kind of story where Harry dies, and stays dead. Normally he would have, since he survived on luck
Natural progression of Game of Thrones is that humanity goes extinct.
The Queen stays in charge.
Thank you.
3/14/2023 c1 HeartsGlow
So many things left up in the air. What happened to Sirius? How did Voldemort come back? How did they get rid of him again?
So many things left up in the air. What happened to Sirius? How did Voldemort come back? How did they get rid of him again?
5/15/2022 c1 4Khatix
Good fic, sucks Harry died. I bet Ammos and all those who voted guilty to send Harry through the veil will not enjoy the afterlife.
4KhatixGood fic, sucks Harry died. I bet Ammos and all those who voted guilty to send Harry through the veil will not enjoy the afterlife.
11/6/2021 c1 60EdTheBeast
Not very detailed. A good story. Plots holes in that things were not explained, but that is me doing to much detail!
60EdTheBeastNot very detailed. A good story. Plots holes in that things were not explained, but that is me doing to much detail!
5/31/2021 c1 Guest
Just an small world, STUPIDITY.
Just an small world, STUPIDITY.
5/18/2021 c1 Millie072
Would love to see a sequel to this. Lots of loose threads. Weasley reaction to Ron & Ginny. Was the video tape ever shown to the DMLE? Was Harry's name ever cleared. When was Voldemort brought back? Harry killed him with a broken neck, then the body returned to pregraveyard status. When the mundane world took care of Voldmort was there any reprisal for Harry's pseudo trial? Excellent story but seems unfinished. Thanks
Would love to see a sequel to this. Lots of loose threads. Weasley reaction to Ron & Ginny. Was the video tape ever shown to the DMLE? Was Harry's name ever cleared. When was Voldemort brought back? Harry killed him with a broken neck, then the body returned to pregraveyard status. When the mundane world took care of Voldmort was there any reprisal for Harry's pseudo trial? Excellent story but seems unfinished. Thanks
4/22/2021 c1 3Steve-Arkarian
Just a suggestion: you should add a warning either in the summary or at the beginning of this story that there is character death. Also, when Harry walked through the veil did he actually die or was it the case that it was a portal like in some stories? Also also, I know the Queen took over the magical government eventually, but whatever happened with the viewing of the tape of Ron being killed in Voldemort being killed?
3Steve-ArkarianJust a suggestion: you should add a warning either in the summary or at the beginning of this story that there is character death. Also, when Harry walked through the veil did he actually die or was it the case that it was a portal like in some stories? Also also, I know the Queen took over the magical government eventually, but whatever happened with the viewing of the tape of Ron being killed in Voldemort being killed?
3/22/2021 c1 Noble Korhedron
I'm confused; who's Hanna's mysterious beau...? And what about the Grangers? Why wouldn't Hermione keep her name in Australia?
I'm confused; who's Hanna's mysterious beau...? And what about the Grangers? Why wouldn't Hermione keep her name in Australia?
12/9/2020 c1 Puzzled
I though Harry broke Voldemort's neck, how can the latter appear in public later?
I though Harry broke Voldemort's neck, how can the latter appear in public later?
5/26/2020 c1 Matt
What language is this written in? The "curio" spell? The snare ones? You use words that I seem to recognize but they don't make any sense.
What language is this written in? The "curio" spell? The snare ones? You use words that I seem to recognize but they don't make any sense.
4/29/2020 c1 1Jimbocous
Good grins. It could have been fun to see this fleshed out a bit. Would have been interesting to know what the Muggle side ended up doing ...
1JimbocousGood grins. It could have been fun to see this fleshed out a bit. Would have been interesting to know what the Muggle side ended up doing ...
3/21/2020 c1 Matt
Do you know English at all? Because this story just devolves into almost complete gibberish at a certain point. It's a mess. Do you not have access to a computer? Because there are multiple FREE word processors available which have spell checking and grammar checking built in. There's absolutely no excuse for this kind of mess. Why in the world would you write in a language that you don't know?
Do you know English at all? Because this story just devolves into almost complete gibberish at a certain point. It's a mess. Do you not have access to a computer? Because there are multiple FREE word processors available which have spell checking and grammar checking built in. There's absolutely no excuse for this kind of mess. Why in the world would you write in a language that you don't know?