for Missing Piece10/19/2022 c25 camille
You live!
Good chapter. 3 3
You live!
Good chapter. 3 3
10/19/2022 c25 KazooKaren
Oh my. Clay is still in pretty bad shape. The guys are being great brothers. It would be hard on them too. Looking forward to more.
Oh my. Clay is still in pretty bad shape. The guys are being great brothers. It would be hard on them too. Looking forward to more.
12/30/2021 c23 B. Boudreau
This is an amazingly written story and I do hope you will be able to finish it. I need to know the ending... please!
This is an amazingly written story and I do hope you will be able to finish it. I need to know the ending... please!
10/24/2021 c23 Ada51163
Hi, i love your story! It is imazing.
you weren't even afraid of the stool, and the moments associated with it are one of the people ones who wrote about it, I applaud
definitely continue, I'm looking forward to it
Ada
Hi, i love your story! It is imazing.
you weren't even afraid of the stool, and the moments associated with it are one of the people ones who wrote about it, I applaud
definitely continue, I'm looking forward to it
Ada
9/19/2021 c23 Guest
Please another part I love this story so much
Please another part I love this story so much
3/3/2021 c22 Barbara Boudreau
I have read this really wonderful story twice. I know you mentioned earlier that it would probably be finished after the 22nd. chapter so I am wondering if it is indeed the last chapter now? I was so hoping that the ending would let us readers know that Clay did survive all the trauma and eventually recovered to serve again with Bravo Team. Is there any chance that you could add a short Chapter which would put our anxious minds at rest? Many thanks for listening!
I have read this really wonderful story twice. I know you mentioned earlier that it would probably be finished after the 22nd. chapter so I am wondering if it is indeed the last chapter now? I was so hoping that the ending would let us readers know that Clay did survive all the trauma and eventually recovered to serve again with Bravo Team. Is there any chance that you could add a short Chapter which would put our anxious minds at rest? Many thanks for listening!
2/28/2021 c22 BelunaTH
.. Awesome heartclenching, sadly not finished story!
hope you will continue...we will see! Thank you so much !
.. Awesome heartclenching, sadly not finished story!
hope you will continue...we will see! Thank you so much !
2/17/2021 c22 Guest
Poor clay, please we need more sickly clay asap
Poor clay, please we need more sickly clay asap
2/18/2021 c22 KazooKaren
Glad to see you haven’t abandoned this story. I’ve always liked it.
Clay gets to go home, but what a tough journey to get there. Hope he starts to improve now that he’s out of the hospital!
Glad to see you haven’t abandoned this story. I’ve always liked it.
Clay gets to go home, but what a tough journey to get there. Hope he starts to improve now that he’s out of the hospital!
12/6/2020 c21 JeaneneP
Ok, so glad the end of the hospital stay is in sight! Agree, now to see how he is going to recover with their help! Awesome, please continue soonthis is great!
Ok, so glad the end of the hospital stay is in sight! Agree, now to see how he is going to recover with their help! Awesome, please continue soonthis is great!
10/23/2020 c2 
26The Phantom Dragon
Either you are a medical professional, been more exposed than I have been to those, or really, really good at and dedicated to your research in writing-Whatever way, my small crummy black heart takes its hat off to ya. You made me have to look up stuff and nothing makes my non-existent conscience happier than learning new things and all the fun ways to torment people inventively.
26The Phantom DragonEither you are a medical professional, been more exposed than I have been to those, or really, really good at and dedicated to your research in writing-Whatever way, my small crummy black heart takes its hat off to ya. You made me have to look up stuff and nothing makes my non-existent conscience happier than learning new things and all the fun ways to torment people inventively.