3/28/2020 c1 Evim Estelanor
Wow, this is such a cool story! Always interesting to see what Aragorn may have experienced in his travels!
Wow, this is such a cool story! Always interesting to see what Aragorn may have experienced in his travels!
1/10/2020 c1 46TapTapAlways
Awww. That was a really nice story. Keep up the good work! (Sorta curious if he kept the bowl though. I was half expecting Faramir or somebody to come across it in Gondor at the end!)
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Awww. That was a really nice story. Keep up the good work! (Sorta curious if he kept the bowl though. I was half expecting Faramir or somebody to come across it in Gondor at the end!)
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6/22/2019 c1 2k+Hawki
Nicely written. Can't comment on too much specifically, but nicely done. Also brownie points for having something set in Harad - always had an interest in Harad and Rhun, despite (or perhaps) how little lore there is on them compared to the setting's western nations.
Nicely written. Can't comment on too much specifically, but nicely done. Also brownie points for having something set in Harad - always had an interest in Harad and Rhun, despite (or perhaps) how little lore there is on them compared to the setting's western nations.
5/26/2019 c1 67Virtuella
Delightful story and very intriguing. I wonder whether this mysterious lady is a Maia?
Delightful story and very intriguing. I wonder whether this mysterious lady is a Maia?
5/9/2019 c1 margie-me
Very, very well told! Aragorn Estel Thorongil Elessar Telcontar Strider the Dunedain in another of his many guises.
Very, very well told! Aragorn Estel Thorongil Elessar Telcontar Strider the Dunedain in another of his many guises.
5/9/2019 c1 46sian22
I so enjoy your Harad stories and this one does not disappoint. What an unexpected and delightful door through which Estel himself gets needed hope :)
I so enjoy your Harad stories and this one does not disappoint. What an unexpected and delightful door through which Estel himself gets needed hope :)
5/3/2019 c1 10Zeiphyx
This was really well written. Lovely descriptions and characters, and all of this was really believable too
This was really well written. Lovely descriptions and characters, and all of this was really believable too
4/29/2019 c1 88Darkover
Dear Linda, This was a fine story, well and descriptively written! Your stories about Aragorn's background, his travels before the War of the Ring, are always interesting and plausible. I found myself liking Faridah, as she took no nonsense off of the merchant. Also, she clearly is no follower of Sauron. It was nice that someone gave Aragorn some hope for a change! There are a couple of spelling errors-"dual" should have been "duel," and "council," in the context of this story, should have been "counsel." There are minor mistakes, and not the sort that spell check normally catches. Thank you for writing and posting this story. Sincerely, Darkover
Dear Linda, This was a fine story, well and descriptively written! Your stories about Aragorn's background, his travels before the War of the Ring, are always interesting and plausible. I found myself liking Faridah, as she took no nonsense off of the merchant. Also, she clearly is no follower of Sauron. It was nice that someone gave Aragorn some hope for a change! There are a couple of spelling errors-"dual" should have been "duel," and "council," in the context of this story, should have been "counsel." There are minor mistakes, and not the sort that spell check normally catches. Thank you for writing and posting this story. Sincerely, Darkover
4/28/2019 c1 247Deandra
Interesting. Is that all just from your imagination or is there some basis in Tolkien for this religion in the desert that Faridah mentions?
Always risky to visit soothsayers when you are in disguise! Aragorn got caught out! But at least she did not fully give him away.
- Deandra
Interesting. Is that all just from your imagination or is there some basis in Tolkien for this religion in the desert that Faridah mentions?
Always risky to visit soothsayers when you are in disguise! Aragorn got caught out! But at least she did not fully give him away.
- Deandra