
11/3/2020 c2 Guest
I love how you make this
I love how you make this
6/4/2019 c2
1Azhirii
I'll be interested to see where you intertwine this with your BD rewrite. I sense a plot twist and potential swaying loyalties.
I always felt Bree was never given any good justice for how much potential she had, and I do enjoy the works that save her. While I enjoy seeing her/Brenden in the Cullen coven I suppose your method is more logical.
Id love to see conversation between him and Edythe when the time is right. Also perhaps between him and Beau.

I'll be interested to see where you intertwine this with your BD rewrite. I sense a plot twist and potential swaying loyalties.
I always felt Bree was never given any good justice for how much potential she had, and I do enjoy the works that save her. While I enjoy seeing her/Brenden in the Cullen coven I suppose your method is more logical.
Id love to see conversation between him and Edythe when the time is right. Also perhaps between him and Beau.
5/3/2019 c2 Treyvan685
Thank you again! just got to reading this, i cannot wait for breaking dawn to come out! When should i be expecting another posting? If thats a fair question to ask
Thank you again! just got to reading this, i cannot wait for breaking dawn to come out! When should i be expecting another posting? If thats a fair question to ask
5/1/2019 c2 Northwest.Ghost
That's AMAZING, i'm so happy to see you're really willing to writte your books, and i think that little story about Brenden will make a good link with Breaking Dawn, Thanks for that story!
That's AMAZING, i'm so happy to see you're really willing to writte your books, and i think that little story about Brenden will make a good link with Breaking Dawn, Thanks for that story!
4/29/2019 c2
12Quiet Ryter
TᕼᗩᑎK YOᑌ ᖴOᖇ ᑌᑭᗪᗩTIᑎG YOᑌᖇ ᔕTOᖇY.:) Iᔕ ᗩᑎ ᗩᗰᗩᘔIᑎG ᗩᑎᗪ ᗯOᑎᗪEᖇᖴᑌᒪ ᑕᕼᗩᑭTEᖇ.:) IT'ᔕ ᑕOOᒪ ᗷᑌT IT ᕼᗩᔕ ᗰE ᑕᑌᖇIOᑌᔕ ᗯᕼY TᕼIᖇᗪ ᒪIᖴE ᗩᑎᗪ ᑎOT ᔕEᑕOᑎᗪ ᒪIᖴE? I ᕼᗩᐯE ᗩ ᖴEEᒪIᑎG TᕼᗩT ᗷᖇEᑎᗪEᑎ ᗯOᑌᒪᗪ ᕼᗩᐯE ᖇEᐯEᗩᒪEᗪ TO TᕼE ᑕᑌᒪᒪEᑎᔕ ᐯOᒪTOᖇI'ᔕ IᑎᐯOᒪᐯEᗰEᑎT.:) ᗰY ᗷEᔕT GᑌEᔕᔕ, I'ᗰ ᖇEᗩᒪᒪY E᙭ᑕITEᗪ ᗩᑎᗪ ᑕᑌᖇIOᑌᔕ ᗩᗷOᑌT TᕼE ᑎE᙭T ᑕᕼᗩᑭTEᖇ.:)

TᕼᗩᑎK YOᑌ ᖴOᖇ ᑌᑭᗪᗩTIᑎG YOᑌᖇ ᔕTOᖇY.:) Iᔕ ᗩᑎ ᗩᗰᗩᘔIᑎG ᗩᑎᗪ ᗯOᑎᗪEᖇᖴᑌᒪ ᑕᕼᗩᑭTEᖇ.:) IT'ᔕ ᑕOOᒪ ᗷᑌT IT ᕼᗩᔕ ᗰE ᑕᑌᖇIOᑌᔕ ᗯᕼY TᕼIᖇᗪ ᒪIᖴE ᗩᑎᗪ ᑎOT ᔕEᑕOᑎᗪ ᒪIᖴE? I ᕼᗩᐯE ᗩ ᖴEEᒪIᑎG TᕼᗩT ᗷᖇEᑎᗪEᑎ ᗯOᑌᒪᗪ ᕼᗩᐯE ᖇEᐯEᗩᒪEᗪ TO TᕼE ᑕᑌᒪᒪEᑎᔕ ᐯOᒪTOᖇI'ᔕ IᑎᐯOᒪᐯEᗰEᑎT.:) ᗰY ᗷEᔕT GᑌEᔕᔕ, I'ᗰ ᖇEᗩᒪᒪY E᙭ᑕITEᗪ ᗩᑎᗪ ᑕᑌᖇIOᑌᔕ ᗩᗷOᑌT TᕼE ᑎE᙭T ᑕᕼᗩᑭTEᖇ.:)
4/29/2019 c1 Quiet Ryter
TᕼIᔕ Iᔕ ᗩᑎ ᗩᗰᗩᘔIᑎG ᗩᑎᗪ ᗯOᑎᗪEᖇᖴᑌᒪ ᔕTOᖇY.:) IT'ᔕ ᑕOOᒪ TO ᔕEE ᖴᖇOᗰ ᗷᖇEᑎᗪᗩᑎ'ᔕ ᔕIᗪE Oᖴ TᕼE ᔕTOᖇY.:) I ᖇEᗰEᗰᗷEᖇ ᗯITᕼ ᗷᖇEE ᗩᑎᗪ IT ᑕEᖇTᗩIᑎᒪY ᔕᑌᖇᑭᖇIᔕEᗪ ᗰE ᒪIKE TᕼIᔕ OᑎE ᗯIᒪᒪ.:) I'ᗰ ᖇEᗩᒪᒪY ᖇEᗩᒪᒪY E᙭ᑕITEᗪ ᗩᑎᗪ ᑕᑌᖇIOᑌᔕ ᗩᗷOᑌT TᕼE ᑎE᙭T ᑕᕼᗩᑭTEᖇ.:)
TᕼIᔕ Iᔕ ᗩᑎ ᗩᗰᗩᘔIᑎG ᗩᑎᗪ ᗯOᑎᗪEᖇᖴᑌᒪ ᔕTOᖇY.:) IT'ᔕ ᑕOOᒪ TO ᔕEE ᖴᖇOᗰ ᗷᖇEᑎᗪᗩᑎ'ᔕ ᔕIᗪE Oᖴ TᕼE ᔕTOᖇY.:) I ᖇEᗰEᗰᗷEᖇ ᗯITᕼ ᗷᖇEE ᗩᑎᗪ IT ᑕEᖇTᗩIᑎᒪY ᔕᑌᖇᑭᖇIᔕEᗪ ᗰE ᒪIKE TᕼIᔕ OᑎE ᗯIᒪᒪ.:) I'ᗰ ᖇEᗩᒪᒪY ᖇEᗩᒪᒪY E᙭ᑕITEᗪ ᗩᑎᗪ ᑕᑌᖇIOᑌᔕ ᗩᗷOᑌT TᕼE ᑎE᙭T ᑕᕼᗩᑭTEᖇ.:)