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1/14/2020 c3 derektomlinson
a very pissed off leiko tomago hissing shouting yelling at her boyfriend slap OK HIRO HAMADA WHAT THE FUCKING HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU THIS IS LEIKO TOMAGO NOT GOGO TOMAGO TALKING TO MY IDIOT BOYFRIEND WHO DECIDES TO RUN OFF WITHOUT TELLING AUNT CASS WHERE YOU WAS GOING TO OK GOGO TOMAGO HISSING TO HER BOYFRIEND HIRO SLAP NEVER DO SOMETHING THAT STUPID AGAIN
12/22/2019 c3 derektomlinson
a happy peeved pissed off leiko gogo tomoko hissing at saying to her boyfriend yes hiro i love you i care and worry about you when my idiot boyfriend go and do stupid things like going into good luck alley to botfight with yama
11/30/2019 c3 8BackTheBlue
No kissing or loving? so disappointed...
5/24/2019 c3 20jettmanas
I liked the description of getting up the bridge, then the tension of dealing with the emotional Hiro.

Typos (if you want to revise)-
hunch. (S)he
huge red (pole)
on her (helmet)
(courtesy) of being
just (hoped) this would
(He looked between the two friends before)
(friends) are (read) and

Good work with Go Go deciding to silently wait and to physically grab him. Sometimes the simple methods work to get through to a difficult case like Hiro in this story. Solid mention of her being there for him in the future. Well done.
5/23/2019 c2 jettmanas
Surprising use of the f-word and conflict between Go Go and Wasabi. I wonder if they'll find him.

Typos:
(S)ilence reigned
would... (never) forgive myself

Seems marked as complete. Good one. I write BH6 as well.
5/23/2019 c1 jettmanas
Nice descriptions and a solid conflict. Good Go Go POV and interaction w/Cass.

Typos:
(Aunt) Cass
our (suits)," she commanded.
sir," Go Go (hissed)
(command)
5/21/2019 c3 lelcar
I like to see GoGo as Hiro's protective, adopted sister. Where Honey Lemon has a motherly touch, Tomago prefers a "tough love" approach.
Back in "Prey Date", Gogo was the one rallying the rest against Orso for kidnapping Hiro. I suspect, had he been actually hurt, she wouldn't had show mercy to the monster.

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