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for fire in the heart(rewrite)

6/10/2020 c1 H
You have some crazy grammar mistakes, capitalisation errors, paragraphing issues and others I could list but, and I quote you, is too much too remember despite myself not being lazy. Shit story, mate.
1/5/2020 c4 The Book of Eli
Another chapter full of drama i like it...
12/29/2019 c3 The Book of Eli
Still interesting...
12/14/2019 c2 The Book of Eli
Being honest the original story was the first fanfic i read. And i inspired me to write fanfics. I hope you do this right also you have a few errors but nothing big...
12/14/2019 c1 The Book of Eli
Interesting very interesting...
12/12/2019 c1 Guest
Don't worry about what that guest said, it was a good start
6/14/2019 c1 4brandonleewolfe1
hey at least I'm trying I'm not just as good like everybody else gorbash150 was good at this I just need help to make a good story so plz help if anybody reading this
5/6/2019 c1 brandonleewolfe1
Hello this is my first fanfic I'm new to this give me some advice or help me I'm not good at this
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