for THE MANY LIVES OF A MASTER OF DEATH10/15/2020 c9 Guest
Good premise that this story is giving me a killer headache. I agree with the previous review that your grammar is horrible and it is very hard to read. You need a beta
Good premise that this story is giving me a killer headache. I agree with the previous review that your grammar is horrible and it is very hard to read. You need a beta
6/21/2019 c15 kagewolf25
I really love your story, though I kinda am annoyed with Magnus cause it seems like harry is always trying to do stuff or follow what Magnus wants, to keep him happy so I would really like to see a chapter where harry gets angry at Magnus, plus a chapter where Magnus is chasing harry please, anyway I love everything else about your story can't waiting for your next update
I really love your story, though I kinda am annoyed with Magnus cause it seems like harry is always trying to do stuff or follow what Magnus wants, to keep him happy so I would really like to see a chapter where harry gets angry at Magnus, plus a chapter where Magnus is chasing harry please, anyway I love everything else about your story can't waiting for your next update
6/18/2019 c3 Guest
I can barely understand what it is that I am reading, the spelling is equal to that of a 3 year old, lets not even talk about the grammar. Did you even bother to proof read before submitting this. Get yourself a Beta that can read and write queens english.
I can barely understand what it is that I am reading, the spelling is equal to that of a 3 year old, lets not even talk about the grammar. Did you even bother to proof read before submitting this. Get yourself a Beta that can read and write queens english.
6/20/2019 c15 
6Estrela Polar
Ficou legal demais, vc ja tentou fazer um capitulo da fic os guardiões da galáxia, sendo o Harry o Peter Quill e o Magnus serio o Drax. seria demais.
6Estrela PolarFicou legal demais, vc ja tentou fazer um capitulo da fic os guardiões da galáxia, sendo o Harry o Peter Quill e o Magnus serio o Drax. seria demais.
6/18/2019 c14 Estrela Polar
gostei muito, se alguem adotar esse capitulo para continuar, vc por favor me avise para que eu possa favoritar e continuar a ler, sou viciado em xmen.
gostei muito, se alguem adotar esse capitulo para continuar, vc por favor me avise para que eu possa favoritar e continuar a ler, sou viciado em xmen.
6/17/2019 c14 1donniedarko81
very interesting chapter and I can see the similarities in the speech between Harry and Senator Kelly in your story and Jean Grey and Kelly in Tricktsters and Gods by sakurademonalchemist
1donniedarko81very interesting chapter and I can see the similarities in the speech between Harry and Senator Kelly in your story and Jean Grey and Kelly in Tricktsters and Gods by sakurademonalchemist