for Death's Knight6/22 c7 BlindFaunusGirl
Enjoyed the story, and I hope you find a way to continue it in the future. If not thanks for sharing this much of your story.
Enjoyed the story, and I hope you find a way to continue it in the future. If not thanks for sharing this much of your story.
3/20/2020 c1 
15Aurora Nightstar
Wow! Very exciting first chapter. Ron turned traitor! I wasn’t expecting that. Nicely done.
15Aurora NightstarWow! Very exciting first chapter. Ron turned traitor! I wasn’t expecting that. Nicely done.
8/13/2019 c7 hunzbookwyrm
I truly hope that you will be able to get back into the story, I would really like to see more of this story.
I truly hope that you will be able to get back into the story, I would really like to see more of this story.
7/31/2019 c7 levi.hall.9279
Sad to see you lose motivation but understand and will eagerly but patiently await the next chapter to this excellent story
Sad to see you lose motivation but understand and will eagerly but patiently await the next chapter to this excellent story
7/25/2019 c7 Guest
Until next time then, good luck on your next project.
Until next time then, good luck on your next project.
7/26/2019 c7 BDozer
From my perspective Harry and Hermione are 18 year olds, fresh out of a war, in the bodies of ten year olds, with the knowledge that a lot of people are going to die. So the quicker Hermione breaks away from her parents, the more time they get to prepare and spend time together.
You have a strong premise here, just remember it is your story, constructive reviews are helpful, outright rude and demanding ones are just not worth the time it takes to read them.
Will look forward to when you find your mojo again.
From my perspective Harry and Hermione are 18 year olds, fresh out of a war, in the bodies of ten year olds, with the knowledge that a lot of people are going to die. So the quicker Hermione breaks away from her parents, the more time they get to prepare and spend time together.
You have a strong premise here, just remember it is your story, constructive reviews are helpful, outright rude and demanding ones are just not worth the time it takes to read them.
Will look forward to when you find your mojo again.
7/23/2019 c7 BillBrink
Don't let the nay-sayers get you down. This is your first story. Of course there are going to be problems. But the only way to improve is to keep writing. As the famous quote asked, "Did we give up when the Germans bombed Peril Harbor?" NO! Think of it as a test of character. Good luck.
Don't let the nay-sayers get you down. This is your first story. Of course there are going to be problems. But the only way to improve is to keep writing. As the famous quote asked, "Did we give up when the Germans bombed Peril Harbor?" NO! Think of it as a test of character. Good luck.
7/24/2019 c7 2firebird-fenix
Its no problem, take your time, just try not to update in source code, its a little hard to read on that, other than that, take your time and recover your inspiration, maybe reading other stories can give you ideas of where you want to direct this story, and/or you could ask for ideas of us readers about what we want (just a suggestion) then you can make a decision having all the suggestions made to you.
Bye
2firebird-fenixIts no problem, take your time, just try not to update in source code, its a little hard to read on that, other than that, take your time and recover your inspiration, maybe reading other stories can give you ideas of where you want to direct this story, and/or you could ask for ideas of us readers about what we want (just a suggestion) then you can make a decision having all the suggestions made to you.
Bye
7/23/2019 c7 Anime928
I think you should redo the last chapter and have them explain to her parents what’s going to happen. Since they have knowledge of the future you can have them convince her parents that they need to do these dark acts against their enemies. Have them as their light in the darkness.
I think you should redo the last chapter and have them explain to her parents what’s going to happen. Since they have knowledge of the future you can have them convince her parents that they need to do these dark acts against their enemies. Have them as their light in the darkness.