for Come Sundown5/24/2020 c15 Tweety
Nice!
Nice!
5/19/2020 c13 Opaquee
Oh man, have I not visited this story in a while! You have so many new chapters and I'm catching up just now on all the new updates and so far...love it! honestly, I think its a brilliant story and I'm happy you're updating I just hope to see you post more regularly.
Now onto the new chapters! I really liked the Valentine saloon chapter where she gambles Arthurs gun, and oh the reference to Issac T-T
The chapter where they start the journey good, face pace and I like how there is this tension between Arthur and Amelia, but i can see them getting along soon
Oh man, have I not visited this story in a while! You have so many new chapters and I'm catching up just now on all the new updates and so far...love it! honestly, I think its a brilliant story and I'm happy you're updating I just hope to see you post more regularly.
Now onto the new chapters! I really liked the Valentine saloon chapter where she gambles Arthurs gun, and oh the reference to Issac T-T
The chapter where they start the journey good, face pace and I like how there is this tension between Arthur and Amelia, but i can see them getting along soon
5/17/2020 c14 Guest
Great first chapter! Ignorance is bliss mother :D that cracked me up. I’ve been wanting to read a FF with Mary, and I like the idea of her having a daughter. I hope she’s a firecracker like I’m predicting!
Great first chapter! Ignorance is bliss mother :D that cracked me up. I’ve been wanting to read a FF with Mary, and I like the idea of her having a daughter. I hope she’s a firecracker like I’m predicting!
9/25/2019 c12 Guest
Honestly, I love the story so far, the action, characters, it’s all so nicely written! Please write more
Honestly, I love the story so far, the action, characters, it’s all so nicely written! Please write more
9/24/2019 c12 Omuyev
Pretty sure when Amelia learns, she would be more efficient in killing since she shot that O'Driscoll in neck. Heck i would not be surprised when she would be watching her next kill, writhing on the ground bleeding from neck and slowly dying.
Pretty sure when Amelia learns, she would be more efficient in killing since she shot that O'Driscoll in neck. Heck i would not be surprised when she would be watching her next kill, writhing on the ground bleeding from neck and slowly dying.
9/22/2019 c12 Guest
Awesome chapter!
Awesome chapter!
9/8/2019 c10 Guest
Poor Amelia :(
Poor Amelia :(
9/7/2019 c10 Guest
Another marvelous chapter, Arthur is in his usual character. Keep up the good work!
Another marvelous chapter, Arthur is in his usual character. Keep up the good work!
8/19/2019 c9 Guest reader
Well done! I tip my hat to you.!
Well done! I tip my hat to you.!
7/16/2019 c7 
12SparkeyChan
Honestly, I came in this expecting something that's entertaining but nothing more...
Thankfully I was proven wrong! the story is well placed and the character interactions feel organic.
I love Amelia's character and I really enjoyed this story, I'm waiting patiently for another great chapter in an easily loveable story.
Keep up the great work!
12SparkeyChanHonestly, I came in this expecting something that's entertaining but nothing more...
Thankfully I was proven wrong! the story is well placed and the character interactions feel organic.
I love Amelia's character and I really enjoyed this story, I'm waiting patiently for another great chapter in an easily loveable story.
Keep up the great work!