11/19 c44 bodydropped505
keep up the good work, just ignore the haters. this is your universe and your playground. great story hope it gets finished one day
keep up the good work, just ignore the haters. this is your universe and your playground. great story hope it gets finished one day
10/13 c44 Guest
May the wolf of remnant return to hunt the wicked again
May the wolf of remnant return to hunt the wicked again
10/2 c12 1Plasma Dragon 312
Gotta be real I thought for certain it was Blake that Six had just executed when she said, “tired of being pushed around.”
Gotta be real I thought for certain it was Blake that Six had just executed when she said, “tired of being pushed around.”
10/1 c4 Plasma Dragon 312
Fun fact did you know Spartans are cellularly immortal? Not as in immortal but in that their cells replicate perfectly. Normally when a human cell replicates it loses a tiny bit of the tail end of the dna. Think of like the plastic tip part of your shoelace. Meaning that they potentially live up to over 200-250 years old! Excluding environmental factors.
Fun fact did you know Spartans are cellularly immortal? Not as in immortal but in that their cells replicate perfectly. Normally when a human cell replicates it loses a tiny bit of the tail end of the dna. Think of like the plastic tip part of your shoelace. Meaning that they potentially live up to over 200-250 years old! Excluding environmental factors.
6/13 c8 1MercenaryGrok
On my third reread, i really hope you continue, just dont read the reviews and bashings
On my third reread, i really hope you continue, just dont read the reviews and bashings
5/9 c44 fantasma233e
Thank you and enjoy your life however you want. I look forward to the next chapter.
Thank you and enjoy your life however you want. I look forward to the next chapter.
4/27 c44 A Sole Reviewer
hey man, hope life is treating you well. just wanted to say that i enjoyed your a lot. I've always trouble looking for stories because they are either paced way too quickly or it's not long enough. This was not only paced correctly but this is also long. I like how you portrayed Six and it seems believable enough to think that this is how he might act if he was placed in this situation. Over the course of the story, i saw you become more aggressive to the commenter and rightfully so. I just feel like you should just ignore them, responding to them will only make them want more attention. Again, keep up the great work, and look forward to reading your next chapter, whenever that might be.
hey man, hope life is treating you well. just wanted to say that i enjoyed your a lot. I've always trouble looking for stories because they are either paced way too quickly or it's not long enough. This was not only paced correctly but this is also long. I like how you portrayed Six and it seems believable enough to think that this is how he might act if he was placed in this situation. Over the course of the story, i saw you become more aggressive to the commenter and rightfully so. I just feel like you should just ignore them, responding to them will only make them want more attention. Again, keep up the great work, and look forward to reading your next chapter, whenever that might be.
4/21 c38 Guest
I prefer this Yang tbh… more fiery and feisty
I prefer this Yang tbh… more fiery and feisty
4/17 c2 vswey
your review rules are a bit silly. you are essentially saying dont leave reviews unless they are positive? anyway i am not 'bashing' you but your first couple chapters could do with an editing pass. you switch a bit between first person narrations (six) and third person omniscient (everyone else). it doesnt really blend well and is a bit confusing.
your review rules are a bit silly. you are essentially saying dont leave reviews unless they are positive? anyway i am not 'bashing' you but your first couple chapters could do with an editing pass. you switch a bit between first person narrations (six) and third person omniscient (everyone else). it doesnt really blend well and is a bit confusing.
4/9 c44 Guest
Wow, still can’t believe there are people who believes this story is bad despite it being YOUR vision
Wow, still can’t believe there are people who believes this story is bad despite it being YOUR vision