
9/8/2023 c2
7TheAttemptedWriter
Is there a reason aura wasn't utilized by Raven? She only uses it later to boost her strength in her legs, but a trained huntress (Like Raven) has aura up to protect them 24/7 while passively giving them a physical boost. So when 6 first went to attack her he should've been stopped in his tracks by said aura initially until he broke through it. I'm also assuming this is pre maiden Raven.

Is there a reason aura wasn't utilized by Raven? She only uses it later to boost her strength in her legs, but a trained huntress (Like Raven) has aura up to protect them 24/7 while passively giving them a physical boost. So when 6 first went to attack her he should've been stopped in his tracks by said aura initially until he broke through it. I'm also assuming this is pre maiden Raven.
9/7/2023 c38
7Savior16
oh boy, yang is going off the deep end, the picture is already in front of her and she doesn't admit it.

oh boy, yang is going off the deep end, the picture is already in front of her and she doesn't admit it.
9/7/2023 c24 Savior16
man, ozpin may not be a grimm like Salem, but Jesus, he is a wolf in sheep's clothing.
man, ozpin may not be a grimm like Salem, but Jesus, he is a wolf in sheep's clothing.
9/4/2023 c5 Guest
This story amazing! This a unique twist of the story keeps up the good work and ignore those who despise it leave them to dust
This story amazing! This a unique twist of the story keeps up the good work and ignore those who despise it leave them to dust
8/29/2023 c44
3The Prime Cronos
Well with the Huragok, He should be able to build a communicator with the unsc

Well with the Huragok, He should be able to build a communicator with the unsc
8/12/2023 c44
20Crimson Soldat
Well, this story has been really enjoyable so far. I like where this one is going despite the infamous 'broken base' status it has got. C'mon, it's fanfiction and it is really up to the writer's imagination.
I really cannot wait to see more chapters in the possible future. Though I can predict these five things that are likely to happen:
1) The Engineer that is floating to follow Six will probably join due to his hesitation
2) The Hazel-Six fight might have tons of bloodshed
3) Six getting the Relics
4) Upon reaching Atlas, he is most likely to get capture by PMCs hired either by the SDC or Atlas Military
5)If Six manages to break out from his captivity, then Atlas would have a high chance of falling. Not due to him, but probably due to them messing with something within the Forerunner Facility that isn't related to the Flood.
There you have it, I hope you'll respond to the this review soon. With that said, I'll probably see you when the next chapter is out!

Well, this story has been really enjoyable so far. I like where this one is going despite the infamous 'broken base' status it has got. C'mon, it's fanfiction and it is really up to the writer's imagination.
I really cannot wait to see more chapters in the possible future. Though I can predict these five things that are likely to happen:
1) The Engineer that is floating to follow Six will probably join due to his hesitation
2) The Hazel-Six fight might have tons of bloodshed
3) Six getting the Relics
4) Upon reaching Atlas, he is most likely to get capture by PMCs hired either by the SDC or Atlas Military
5)If Six manages to break out from his captivity, then Atlas would have a high chance of falling. Not due to him, but probably due to them messing with something within the Forerunner Facility that isn't related to the Flood.
There you have it, I hope you'll respond to the this review soon. With that said, I'll probably see you when the next chapter is out!
7/31/2023 c44 Keksueki
Been following this fic for a couple years now, love the way you characterize Noble 6 and how the characters are growing with the story, keep up the good work and best of luck going forwards!
Been following this fic for a couple years now, love the way you characterize Noble 6 and how the characters are growing with the story, keep up the good work and best of luck going forwards!
7/22/2023 c44 ColcytusRising
I'm glad to see another chapter, the story I'd great, I'm eagerly waiting for more lol
I'm glad to see another chapter, the story I'd great, I'm eagerly waiting for more lol
7/20/2023 c3 Darkeous
Good this is it bro let's goo "I have no intentions of travelling with another" YAAAAAAAA that's what we need
Good this is it bro let's goo "I have no intentions of travelling with another" YAAAAAAAA that's what we need
7/20/2023 c2 Darkeous
the only issue i have is I don't rlly think noble would talk like this, there is just a lil something off. tbh he is a man of focus and sheer fucking will.
the only issue i have is I don't rlly think noble would talk like this, there is just a lil something off. tbh he is a man of focus and sheer fucking will.