for Wolves That Walk Alone6/2/2023 c44 
1hellothere45
personally I always figured the story would end in Atlas, Six prevents the fall of atlas and yeets Salem into space, and ospins soul recarnates into Six's body, six getting a extremely op semblance realty warping (creates or replicates memories or ideas and merging it around the real world) and Him and Saliem duke it out in Atlas, Six either uses the star ship to return home or the UNSC tracking Six's distress signal, over all I feel like the story has sort of a Dark AU, mabey seeing a Six redemtion arc where he uses the forerunner tech to create yang a new arm or reconcile broken relation ships like with summer. Honestly You pulled the story off prity well with the plot but I felt like there were to much unessary items and at times it felt like the plot just stopped completely. but this is just my ideas I. Kodus to you for taking this story all this way. i tried to write a Halo x Mass effect cross over but abandoned in in 3 chapters, I lost confidence in my self to pull through, you made it this far don't give up.
1hellothere45personally I always figured the story would end in Atlas, Six prevents the fall of atlas and yeets Salem into space, and ospins soul recarnates into Six's body, six getting a extremely op semblance realty warping (creates or replicates memories or ideas and merging it around the real world) and Him and Saliem duke it out in Atlas, Six either uses the star ship to return home or the UNSC tracking Six's distress signal, over all I feel like the story has sort of a Dark AU, mabey seeing a Six redemtion arc where he uses the forerunner tech to create yang a new arm or reconcile broken relation ships like with summer. Honestly You pulled the story off prity well with the plot but I felt like there were to much unessary items and at times it felt like the plot just stopped completely. but this is just my ideas I. Kodus to you for taking this story all this way. i tried to write a Halo x Mass effect cross over but abandoned in in 3 chapters, I lost confidence in my self to pull through, you made it this far don't give up.
5/29/2023 c2 4TheManThatWalksTheAbyss115
To Anonym: First, I don't use guest accounts to threaten people or lash out. If I have a problem with someone, I log in and confront them just as I am doing now. I don't have a problem with criticism, I have a problem with unnecessary flaming and hate, but I guess people take it as criticism. Second, I consider dropping the story because I haven't done anything with it in a while. Lastly, you call me a pussy for apparently going under guest accounts, which I do no such thing, because of the fans of this story are extremely supportive and sometimes fanatical. Yet, you're hiding behind an anonymous account and calling me a pussy. If you consider this as me lashing out then go right ahead. I don't consider it as such but merely as me responding in a civil manner.
4TheManThatWalksTheAbyss115To Anonym: First, I don't use guest accounts to threaten people or lash out. If I have a problem with someone, I log in and confront them just as I am doing now. I don't have a problem with criticism, I have a problem with unnecessary flaming and hate, but I guess people take it as criticism. Second, I consider dropping the story because I haven't done anything with it in a while. Lastly, you call me a pussy for apparently going under guest accounts, which I do no such thing, because of the fans of this story are extremely supportive and sometimes fanatical. Yet, you're hiding behind an anonymous account and calling me a pussy. If you consider this as me lashing out then go right ahead. I don't consider it as such but merely as me responding in a civil manner.
5/25/2023 c1 Anonym
Terrible story, it turns six into a murder hobo that is never in the wrong, even for killing innocents.
This ain't a video game where you can kill hordes of people and not have others be wary of you.
What's worse is the author constantly going off about "malicious" reviews.
Threatening people in reviews under guest accounts and promising to drop the story.
Imagine being such a pussy that you can't handle a little criticism.
Deep in your little heart you know I'm right. Good day.
Terrible story, it turns six into a murder hobo that is never in the wrong, even for killing innocents.
This ain't a video game where you can kill hordes of people and not have others be wary of you.
What's worse is the author constantly going off about "malicious" reviews.
Threatening people in reviews under guest accounts and promising to drop the story.
Imagine being such a pussy that you can't handle a little criticism.
Deep in your little heart you know I'm right. Good day.
5/9/2023 c38 Dib
I know you probably won't read this but. YOU are doing a wonderful job, you are making this story your own and not just copy and paste, is it a little dark sometimes yes, but the thing is you are doing it as world building.
Now don't mind the haters they don't know a good story when it hits them. Now that isn't to say they can't have there own opinions but they don't need to threaten you because they don't like the way you are going with the story.
I know you probably won't read this but. YOU are doing a wonderful job, you are making this story your own and not just copy and paste, is it a little dark sometimes yes, but the thing is you are doing it as world building.
Now don't mind the haters they don't know a good story when it hits them. Now that isn't to say they can't have there own opinions but they don't need to threaten you because they don't like the way you are going with the story.
5/6/2023 c44 nathanfromschool
either way bro, you're a real one. have a few reservations, but either way its still a great story
either way bro, you're a real one. have a few reservations, but either way its still a great story
5/5/2023 c30 nathanfromschool
Bruh fuck u. I'm tired of seeing losers like u making up stupid stories with the ACCUALLY HERO OF A FUCKING ENTIRE VIDEO GAME. look like a invincible god who can DO ANYTHING that kills with no thought. cuz ur basing this of of ur fever dream so stfu. u like mixing DOOM ETERERNAL with 2 universes that don't deserve this harassment by people like u. so go fuck urself and MAYBE READ THE LORE OF HALO JACKASS
Bruh fuck u. I'm tired of seeing losers like u making up stupid stories with the ACCUALLY HERO OF A FUCKING ENTIRE VIDEO GAME. look like a invincible god who can DO ANYTHING that kills with no thought. cuz ur basing this of of ur fever dream so stfu. u like mixing DOOM ETERERNAL with 2 universes that don't deserve this harassment by people like u. so go fuck urself and MAYBE READ THE LORE OF HALO JACKASS
5/1/2023 c44 D3Diton
I hope you do come back, I thoroughly enjoyed this, it's not like most of the FF CO on this site where jaune is some chad or the Protag teams up with Ozpin. I love this spin here
I hope you do come back, I thoroughly enjoyed this, it's not like most of the FF CO on this site where jaune is some chad or the Protag teams up with Ozpin. I love this spin here
4/28/2023 c44 Guest
I know you may not be looking at this story soon, but Overall, Six that black Wolf reminds me of Artorias and Sif from Dark Souls
I know you may not be looking at this story soon, but Overall, Six that black Wolf reminds me of Artorias and Sif from Dark Souls
4/24/2023 c44 WWF67
I found your FanFiction from its TV Tropes page and I have to say I love it. I do hope you go back to writing more chapters in the future because I enjoy your characterization and hope to see things like Salem seeing her inner circle dying off and how she deals with it, Yang waking up and reading the explusion letter and how she deals with the aftermath of her actions, and character perspectives from Ruby, Ironwood, etc. As for the... 'malcious' reviews, please just ignore them. I'm a moderator in a another community and just like trolls, don't feed them by giving them attention it will make things worse. That's all I have to say. Since this is a guest review, disreguard any other reviews using my username as they could just be impersonators.
-WWF67
I found your FanFiction from its TV Tropes page and I have to say I love it. I do hope you go back to writing more chapters in the future because I enjoy your characterization and hope to see things like Salem seeing her inner circle dying off and how she deals with it, Yang waking up and reading the explusion letter and how she deals with the aftermath of her actions, and character perspectives from Ruby, Ironwood, etc. As for the... 'malcious' reviews, please just ignore them. I'm a moderator in a another community and just like trolls, don't feed them by giving them attention it will make things worse. That's all I have to say. Since this is a guest review, disreguard any other reviews using my username as they could just be impersonators.
-WWF67
4/13/2023 c44 DarthDarthTheSecond
1)
Imma be honest as I just picked the story back up today from chapter 39. I really like your version of Yang. She has none of the plot armor or plot character from the original RWBY. A hothead, on a team with her younger sister who one upped her for team leader and a stuck up princess, I honestly don't see why she never just strait up snapped during her time at beacon and got removed. She had all the reason too.
2)
I think you should probably cross post this story to the AO3 since they seem to be much more accepting of Dark Yang stories.
3)
It is well known for the past couple years that the RWBY community has been corrupting itself slowly, and I think you're a good person for standing up against their fanaticism.
PS)
To those of you who may counter comment me, I ask that you may be calm down and consider if you would talk like this to either your parents, or your significant other if you have them. Would they be ashamed of you acting with such childish rage? You don't necessarily have to reassess yourself but please consider how you would feel if, let's say, you worked really hard on an essay in college and then while you are working on it the ones who will grade you for it say you're going to fail it the entire time. So please, let's all calm down just a minute. After all, a future colleague may find your actions here unsatisfactory.
- DarthDarth
1)
Imma be honest as I just picked the story back up today from chapter 39. I really like your version of Yang. She has none of the plot armor or plot character from the original RWBY. A hothead, on a team with her younger sister who one upped her for team leader and a stuck up princess, I honestly don't see why she never just strait up snapped during her time at beacon and got removed. She had all the reason too.
2)
I think you should probably cross post this story to the AO3 since they seem to be much more accepting of Dark Yang stories.
3)
It is well known for the past couple years that the RWBY community has been corrupting itself slowly, and I think you're a good person for standing up against their fanaticism.
PS)
To those of you who may counter comment me, I ask that you may be calm down and consider if you would talk like this to either your parents, or your significant other if you have them. Would they be ashamed of you acting with such childish rage? You don't necessarily have to reassess yourself but please consider how you would feel if, let's say, you worked really hard on an essay in college and then while you are working on it the ones who will grade you for it say you're going to fail it the entire time. So please, let's all calm down just a minute. After all, a future colleague may find your actions here unsatisfactory.
- DarthDarth
4/11/2023 c9 taintedahab
At this point I’m starting to wonder just how long that reactor on a möljnir suit is supposed to run before refueling
At this point I’m starting to wonder just how long that reactor on a möljnir suit is supposed to run before refueling
4/4/2023 c43 Isaac ClarkeN7
When Opzin reincarnates I don't think he'll be stupid enough to try to provoke 6 again, now he only has Smallwood left, he's a problem both in the short and long term.
When Opzin reincarnates I don't think he'll be stupid enough to try to provoke 6 again, now he only has Smallwood left, he's a problem both in the short and long term.