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7/17/2019 c1 7darklover
Everyone wishes this scene had better dialogue and acting. Though I suppose the dialogue was the main issue since it's hard to work with it.

I think your dialogue was certainly less cheesy so it is an improvement. I liked your work. Good job!
5/28/2019 c1 Guest
While I love your extra commentary with a little more modern twist on their dialogue, I love the original. It's so poetic and formal and gaahhh, I love it!
I do enjoy the inner details you've put in, though.

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