7/16/2023 c54 James Birdsong
Good six chapters.
Good six chapters.
1/14/2023 c48 James Birdsong
Good ten chapters
Good ten chapters
8/2/2022 c42 Guest
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5/20/2022 c18 Guest
I kind of fel bad for Kreacher. If Sirius's demise didn't effect him, Regalus' decades ago had to. And he's been alone since then. Atleast in his twisted way he's not bothered by Sirius' death(or he's sad his mistress' family line died out) and the Black sisters are keeping him company now. Unless they ditched him after they wheedled info out of him, I can see Bellatrix doing that
I kind of fel bad for Kreacher. If Sirius's demise didn't effect him, Regalus' decades ago had to. And he's been alone since then. Atleast in his twisted way he's not bothered by Sirius' death(or he's sad his mistress' family line died out) and the Black sisters are keeping him company now. Unless they ditched him after they wheedled info out of him, I can see Bellatrix doing that
5/20/2022 c15 Dora the Explore
That was so sweet. I was thinking Sirius could floo Andromeda but I don't know if that can be done at Grimmauld. Even though Sirius does it with Harry in 4th year then Bella & Cissa use floo to talk to Kreacher(or do they summon him?). It should be an option as long as Andromeda's house isn't in danger of the wrong people coming in at any moment.
Another option can be a Tonks showing her memories of what Andromeda says in front of her, by using the basin for memories. And Tonks can do the same for what Sirius has to say to Andromeda. This would be a slower communication for Andromeda & Sirius than letters or floo. I want them to talk often so Sirius doesn't go stir crazy and things don't happen like they do in canon.
They can also send howlers through Tonks lol. Friendly howlers. I think Tonks should get Sirius dreamless potions, he has more than enough money to buy whatever he needs. Including potions for Remus. And a sizable donation to hte werewolves to get them from being swayed by Voldy
That was so sweet. I was thinking Sirius could floo Andromeda but I don't know if that can be done at Grimmauld. Even though Sirius does it with Harry in 4th year then Bella & Cissa use floo to talk to Kreacher(or do they summon him?). It should be an option as long as Andromeda's house isn't in danger of the wrong people coming in at any moment.
Another option can be a Tonks showing her memories of what Andromeda says in front of her, by using the basin for memories. And Tonks can do the same for what Sirius has to say to Andromeda. This would be a slower communication for Andromeda & Sirius than letters or floo. I want them to talk often so Sirius doesn't go stir crazy and things don't happen like they do in canon.
They can also send howlers through Tonks lol. Friendly howlers. I think Tonks should get Sirius dreamless potions, he has more than enough money to buy whatever he needs. Including potions for Remus. And a sizable donation to hte werewolves to get them from being swayed by Voldy
4/19/2022 c38 James Birdsong
Good chapter in my humble opinion. Yay!
Good chapter in my humble opinion. Yay!
3/26/2022 c37 James Birdsong
Good chapters!
Good chapters!
3/5/2022 c24 28turanga4
Well-written chapter. It's odd to me to imagine her Patronus changing to a full-on werewolf, as I don't think of those as creatures that would do what a Patronus needs to do (and it'd be odd for Snape to later quip that it looked 'weak'): I've always imagined it would be just a wolf. Still, though, nice little reveal, with it happening first in such a way that Tonks was able to grapple inwardly and reflect on it. I like the simplicity of the line, "She backed up, scared of her own creation."
Well-written chapter. It's odd to me to imagine her Patronus changing to a full-on werewolf, as I don't think of those as creatures that would do what a Patronus needs to do (and it'd be odd for Snape to later quip that it looked 'weak'): I've always imagined it would be just a wolf. Still, though, nice little reveal, with it happening first in such a way that Tonks was able to grapple inwardly and reflect on it. I like the simplicity of the line, "She backed up, scared of her own creation."
3/5/2022 c1 turanga4
Nice first chapter: introduces characters and future dynamics without hitting reader upside the head with anything.
Nice first chapter: introduces characters and future dynamics without hitting reader upside the head with anything.
1/19/2022 c33 James Birdsong
Awesome
Awesome
9/27/2021 c25 ReadBooksWriteThings
Awwww I love Tonks and Fleur's friendship. The poor Veela needs some sort of friend in her life. I really never did get why the Weasleys hated her so much.
Awwww I love Tonks and Fleur's friendship. The poor Veela needs some sort of friend in her life. I really never did get why the Weasleys hated her so much.