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for Lily Loud: Forever alone

10/29/2019 c2 5TheFastFox
can't wait for the next chapter!
10/24/2019 c2 Tristen
This should be good.
6/9/2019 c1 TheFastFox
Hope she finds her siblings soon!
5/18/2019 c1 5SalohcinSilverwing
I think your use of script formatting in your stories can put you at a disadvantage. You want to show, not tell, and script format is a very 'tell'-heavy writing style because it drops detailed description to make it easier to scan the dialogue. This is convenient for people like actors who need to memorize their lines, but I think it weakens the audience's experience of reading the narrative unfold before their eyes.

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