for A Lover's Quest12/12 c86 TriainaMoon
Bravo
The other Amazons looked like they wanted to capture him and could be a issue for the rebels
That was a tantalizing/seductive dance like a royal dancer.
She sure got what she desired raw and rough passion from her man. Was amusing to hear her say Hylla would love him and her hopes of him accepting the deal.
I’m sure that theirs been things happening during their hookup. Possibly news on Hylla, another attempt to kill her and caught the perpetrator, nymphs troubles, Zoe and silena, or Hestia shows up
Great chapter can’t wait to see what happens next. Be safe and update soon
Bravo
The other Amazons looked like they wanted to capture him and could be a issue for the rebels
That was a tantalizing/seductive dance like a royal dancer.
She sure got what she desired raw and rough passion from her man. Was amusing to hear her say Hylla would love him and her hopes of him accepting the deal.
I’m sure that theirs been things happening during their hookup. Possibly news on Hylla, another attempt to kill her and caught the perpetrator, nymphs troubles, Zoe and silena, or Hestia shows up
Great chapter can’t wait to see what happens next. Be safe and update soon
12/7 c82 Guest
Great chapter. Echo still around? My only issues are 1. Perce is a little over dramatic, 2. Lets tone down pairing the girls up, especially thals and reyna
Great chapter. Echo still around? My only issues are 1. Perce is a little over dramatic, 2. Lets tone down pairing the girls up, especially thals and reyna
12/6 c86 chriskidd2001
Glad to see another chapter after sometime yeah i get it my dad works in a shop with long hours and the roads here in Michigan are Icy and dangerous glad Kenzie got what she wanted hopefully Hylla will get up soon amazing chapter as always hope your family had a good Thanksgiving and if we don't see each other until after the new year have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year
Glad to see another chapter after sometime yeah i get it my dad works in a shop with long hours and the roads here in Michigan are Icy and dangerous glad Kenzie got what she wanted hopefully Hylla will get up soon amazing chapter as always hope your family had a good Thanksgiving and if we don't see each other until after the new year have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year
11/29 c85 Guest
Is this fic dead? :(
Is this fic dead? :(
11/19 c28 Guest
I need a movie
I need a movie
11/18 c85 Guest
Hello, when will the next chapter be out?
Hello, when will the next chapter be out?
10/4 c79 vansh4895
okay! so, it really picked up the pace! I am loving this story so far, about 90% done. Looking back, I can see why PJ felt like a bit of an emotional fool and now that I have come this far he has gained more confidence maybe because everyone has become more used to their situation. I like this dynamic better.
okay! so, it really picked up the pace! I am loving this story so far, about 90% done. Looking back, I can see why PJ felt like a bit of an emotional fool and now that I have come this far he has gained more confidence maybe because everyone has become more used to their situation. I like this dynamic better.
10/1 c4 vansh4895
okay, this seems like a nice story, well written and I like it, jowever, on chapter 4 now and I just wanted yo say it feels kinda frustrating to see PJ be so emasculated. what Anabeth dis was definitely not okay and i get he is loyal and what not but it just seem kinda OOC for him to not just speak his mind or express his frustration and anger or just be resentful of her.
i know i am a little late to the party since i just found this story, but I just wanted to get it out. Anabeth actually made ME feel queasy with ber actions.
okay, this seems like a nice story, well written and I like it, jowever, on chapter 4 now and I just wanted yo say it feels kinda frustrating to see PJ be so emasculated. what Anabeth dis was definitely not okay and i get he is loyal and what not but it just seem kinda OOC for him to not just speak his mind or express his frustration and anger or just be resentful of her.
i know i am a little late to the party since i just found this story, but I just wanted to get it out. Anabeth actually made ME feel queasy with ber actions.
9/23 c85 Guest
Great chapter! Excited to see kinzie in the collar - hope they’ll be some kinky stuff
Great chapter! Excited to see kinzie in the collar - hope they’ll be some kinky stuff
9/18 c85 TriainaMoon
That was a fun chapter.
Wonder why Percy didn’t tell them about meeting Hestia and her promise?
The group seems to be drowning in un needed information on nymphs.
Kinzie like many other girls like Silena have regrets of the past but she’s determined to not fail the nymphs.
The wrestling mach for the collar was fun and she seems happy wearing it. The part about wanting to get her lady parts washed just eight was amusing. Don’t understand why or for what the guy was after
That was a fun chapter.
Wonder why Percy didn’t tell them about meeting Hestia and her promise?
The group seems to be drowning in un needed information on nymphs.
Kinzie like many other girls like Silena have regrets of the past but she’s determined to not fail the nymphs.
The wrestling mach for the collar was fun and she seems happy wearing it. The part about wanting to get her lady parts washed just eight was amusing. Don’t understand why or for what the guy was after
9/17 c1 
2brockjr271
wait...a bunch of mortals curb stomped Percy? okay setting aside the fact Percy does have hands despite common belief, he's still a superhuman who at bare minimum can react to bullets and take and deal out blows capable of destroying a building.
2brockjr271wait...a bunch of mortals curb stomped Percy? okay setting aside the fact Percy does have hands despite common belief, he's still a superhuman who at bare minimum can react to bullets and take and deal out blows capable of destroying a building.
9/17 c85 chriskidd2001
That was sweet Percy talking with Kinzie about what happened in the past now enjoying their first time together and talking with a worker their about his own feelings being their
That was sweet Percy talking with Kinzie about what happened in the past now enjoying their first time together and talking with a worker their about his own feelings being their
9/9 c84 TriainaMoon
Even on his birthday he’s got lots of hard work and problems to solve. It appears Hestia is gaining more affection and feelings for Percy that she can’t hide anymore. For supposed to be free spirits and accepting the wild nymphs are awfully callous. Can’t wait for his mom to get her new home and baby plus meet his girls.
Speaking of new home I hope its got all they could hope for and the goddess is warm.
Even on his birthday he’s got lots of hard work and problems to solve. It appears Hestia is gaining more affection and feelings for Percy that she can’t hide anymore. For supposed to be free spirits and accepting the wild nymphs are awfully callous. Can’t wait for his mom to get her new home and baby plus meet his girls.
Speaking of new home I hope its got all they could hope for and the goddess is warm.
9/2 c14 SpeziSuchti
A nice chapter but it is cruel what you did to the pretzels. I can’t imagine eating a pretzel with sugar and cinnamon or with a cheese dip. And a pretzel hotdog is a no-go. On a pretzel has to be much salt, that’s also the original (German) recipe. Following is a personal opinion: I wold never drink a cola to a pretzel, it matches better with an beer, a Radler( beer with lemonade ), a Goaß (beer with cola) or a Spezi (cola with orange-Limonade).
A nice chapter but it is cruel what you did to the pretzels. I can’t imagine eating a pretzel with sugar and cinnamon or with a cheese dip. And a pretzel hotdog is a no-go. On a pretzel has to be much salt, that’s also the original (German) recipe. Following is a personal opinion: I wold never drink a cola to a pretzel, it matches better with an beer, a Radler( beer with lemonade ), a Goaß (beer with cola) or a Spezi (cola with orange-Limonade).