for The Mantle of Remnant4/1/2024 c13 MrMcNasty
All I'm gonna say is that Yang is lucky Chief didn't catch her interrupting Ruby on the range.
Any Range Safety Officer worth their salt will beat you within an inch of your life for putting yourself or others in danger on the range.
All I'm gonna say is that Yang is lucky Chief didn't catch her interrupting Ruby on the range.
Any Range Safety Officer worth their salt will beat you within an inch of your life for putting yourself or others in danger on the range.
3/31/2024 c4 MrMcNasty
"...many isekai protagonists who are male teenagers that disgrace what it means to be a boy and a man..."
You're preaching to the choir, my guy.
Also, your point about plucking characters and inserting them into the main canon is also spot-on. I can't even begin to count how many Halo and Mass Effect crossovers there has been with the Master Chief just becoming another crewmember on the Normandy. The Savior of the Galaxy, the Hero of the Human-Covenant War, given the same agency and respect as Kasumi Goto; a Catwoman ripoff.
Spartan IIs were trained to operate outside of the Chain of Command, spend weeks or even months out of contact with the UNSC without support, and rely only on themselves and the Spartans beside them to complete their mission. Until 2552, and chiefly Operation: Red Flag, the Spartans were boogeyman to the Covenant. Surviving an encounter with a Spartan as a member of the Covenant was less likely than surviving the glassing of a planet.
"...many isekai protagonists who are male teenagers that disgrace what it means to be a boy and a man..."
You're preaching to the choir, my guy.
Also, your point about plucking characters and inserting them into the main canon is also spot-on. I can't even begin to count how many Halo and Mass Effect crossovers there has been with the Master Chief just becoming another crewmember on the Normandy. The Savior of the Galaxy, the Hero of the Human-Covenant War, given the same agency and respect as Kasumi Goto; a Catwoman ripoff.
Spartan IIs were trained to operate outside of the Chain of Command, spend weeks or even months out of contact with the UNSC without support, and rely only on themselves and the Spartans beside them to complete their mission. Until 2552, and chiefly Operation: Red Flag, the Spartans were boogeyman to the Covenant. Surviving an encounter with a Spartan as a member of the Covenant was less likely than surviving the glassing of a planet.
3/28/2024 c30 Lorenzo Ferrari
Update A.S.A.P.!
Update A.S.A.P.!
3/26/2024 c16 Guest
Your characterization of the cast is hilariously bad.
So that's the way you choose to make a characters more realist? Having them swear and having emotional outburst like a toddler everytime they talk to each other. Its ridicule, even more so when Chief actually train the Rose to be like a Spartan. The transition are rought, unisghtly and not polished at all. It feels like i'm seeing a bipolar dipshit goin 360 24/7.
Everytime i read your dialogue, i keep wondering, what the fuck am i reading?
Your characterization of the cast is hilariously bad.
So that's the way you choose to make a characters more realist? Having them swear and having emotional outburst like a toddler everytime they talk to each other. Its ridicule, even more so when Chief actually train the Rose to be like a Spartan. The transition are rought, unisghtly and not polished at all. It feels like i'm seeing a bipolar dipshit goin 360 24/7.
Everytime i read your dialogue, i keep wondering, what the fuck am i reading?
3/9/2024 c30 Guest
It's safe to say that Cinder's plans to fall of Beacon are officially out the window. With the destruction of the White Fang, the deaths of Adam, Sienna, and now Emerald, Cinder will no longer be able to carry out her plan. But hey, that's the price you pay for arrogance, Cindy.
It's safe to say that Cinder's plans to fall of Beacon are officially out the window. With the destruction of the White Fang, the deaths of Adam, Sienna, and now Emerald, Cinder will no longer be able to carry out her plan. But hey, that's the price you pay for arrogance, Cindy.
3/5/2024 c30 Ghostly
If Cinder dies then it will be a devastating blow to Salem’s faction because she along with her team were supposed to infiltrate, and sabotage the academies along with killing, and collecting both the Maiden powers & Relics for her plans moving forward.
If Cinder dies then it will be a devastating blow to Salem’s faction because she along with her team were supposed to infiltrate, and sabotage the academies along with killing, and collecting both the Maiden powers & Relics for her plans moving forward.
3/3/2024 c30 A Random Troll
I’ve been looking forward to this. Make Fire Bitch SUFFER, my good friend. Make her suffering and her humiliation the stuff of legend before the end. You’re already off to a good start…
I’ve been looking forward to this. Make Fire Bitch SUFFER, my good friend. Make her suffering and her humiliation the stuff of legend before the end. You’re already off to a good start…
3/3/2024 c30 Guest
Welcome Back,
Glad to see this continue where we get to see Cinder and Co learn the meaning of "Fuck around And Find Out". With Emerald introduced to the Gears of War style Shotgun Headshot.
Weiss just using a handgun for now does make sense but I'm still a fan of her Dual Wielding a Sword and Pistol. Though her being the designated ammo bearer like something out of Helldivers (1 or 2) amuses me.
It also reminds me that there was indeed someone who made a Helldivers Crossover with RWBY once and yes it's real its called; Helldivers: A Remnant of Force. Stumbled across it by complete accident looking for something involving Helldivers and it happened to be the only one that showed up, this was also months before Helldivers 2 was announced. RWBY is just really popular for crossovers for even the most random things now ain't it? Sadly it hasn't been updated since July of 2020 and that was a minor one after a Year and 10 months of nothing and there was even speculations in the reviews that Covid got the author. Unless the Runaway success of Helldivers 2 rouses the author from their silence it's probably fairly safe to say that the story is dead. I only know of one Fic that managed it anywhere close to that and it started in 2007, went strong for a bit, was sporadically updated till 2016 and then it died.
Welcome Back,
Glad to see this continue where we get to see Cinder and Co learn the meaning of "Fuck around And Find Out". With Emerald introduced to the Gears of War style Shotgun Headshot.
Weiss just using a handgun for now does make sense but I'm still a fan of her Dual Wielding a Sword and Pistol. Though her being the designated ammo bearer like something out of Helldivers (1 or 2) amuses me.
It also reminds me that there was indeed someone who made a Helldivers Crossover with RWBY once and yes it's real its called; Helldivers: A Remnant of Force. Stumbled across it by complete accident looking for something involving Helldivers and it happened to be the only one that showed up, this was also months before Helldivers 2 was announced. RWBY is just really popular for crossovers for even the most random things now ain't it? Sadly it hasn't been updated since July of 2020 and that was a minor one after a Year and 10 months of nothing and there was even speculations in the reviews that Covid got the author. Unless the Runaway success of Helldivers 2 rouses the author from their silence it's probably fairly safe to say that the story is dead. I only know of one Fic that managed it anywhere close to that and it started in 2007, went strong for a bit, was sporadically updated till 2016 and then it died.
3/3/2024 c30 
1Deathtrooper900
It’s great to see rwby on their own. I have a feeling Cinder will be too much for them but Chief will send her running. Can’t wait to see Weiss’s reactions to the fight when the adrenaline comes down.
1Deathtrooper900It’s great to see rwby on their own. I have a feeling Cinder will be too much for them but Chief will send her running. Can’t wait to see Weiss’s reactions to the fight when the adrenaline comes down.
2/29/2024 c30 13IX404
Ohh! Cinder is in DEEP trouble. And that horde of Beowolves? Well, there's a reason why Chief is a literal one man army.
13IX404Ohh! Cinder is in DEEP trouble. And that horde of Beowolves? Well, there's a reason why Chief is a literal one man army.
2/29/2024 c30 GRNauman
This is one of my favorite fanfics of all time. And you are one of the best fanfiction authors of all time. You are the like the Shaquille O’Neal of fanfiction authors. The only complaints that I could possibly have are;
1.) The time between updates. (Which I completely understand why, quality takes time.)
2.) All of the cliffhangers. You are killing me with the cliffhangers.
This is one of my favorite fanfics of all time. And you are one of the best fanfiction authors of all time. You are the like the Shaquille O’Neal of fanfiction authors. The only complaints that I could possibly have are;
1.) The time between updates. (Which I completely understand why, quality takes time.)
2.) All of the cliffhangers. You are killing me with the cliffhangers.
2/27/2024 c30 2merendinoemiliano
Pretty badass job in its own right, but I Hope unlike your other stories Cinder's group survives this and later return as an actual threat. Best of luck with next chapters
2merendinoemilianoPretty badass job in its own right, but I Hope unlike your other stories Cinder's group survives this and later return as an actual threat. Best of luck with next chapters
2/27/2024 c30 Amir2000
Hey! good to see another chapter, always a joy to read, keep up the good work!
Hey! good to see another chapter, always a joy to read, keep up the good work!