
12/31/2024 c36 Guest
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
HALO STOMP RWBY
RWBY SUCKS
12/18/2024 c6 Guest
It’s not John halo it’s jimmy rings with depression
It’s not John halo it’s jimmy rings with depression
12/11/2024 c36 Miguelito030905
Good afternoon author, I loved your fic and I would like to ask your permission to translate it into Spanish.
Good afternoon author, I loved your fic and I would like to ask your permission to translate it into Spanish.
12/3/2024 c36 Guest8492
John ends up with a winning lotto ticket by pure coincidence, if Cortana was still around she'd be needling him like crazy over it. Funny that the first day going incognito has such a result...
Now in order to cash it in you might consider having John give it to Weiss and have her say that a stranger gave it to her and that she'll share some of it with her team but invest the rest as Weiss is already very famous so a lottery win won't add outrageously to it, been trained how to handle large sums of money thus unlikely to misuse it and you usually have to publically disclose who has a winning ticket (which John will certainly NOT want to do) but being a Megacorp heiress its hard for her to be more (in)famous. Then give a large chunk of it back to John for him to squirrel away and if he's feeling generous give some to Neo.
I do wonder if Blake got any information about Roman Torchwick from Cinder after she died as that could be the hook that gets John informed. If so does The Chief choose to co opt Roman's operation or just bury him; there's advantages to both and since Blake already killed Cinder he might be mildly annoyed he didn't do it but potentially express gratitude, or pretend he's Cinder's new intermediary on the other hand. or even her replacement. If a fight broke out I'd be hilarious if John had a rougher time with Roman than Adam Tarus considering how comparatively easily he dealt with that.
I haven't thought of this much but thinking on Cortana; I wonder what she'd think about what John's been doing on Remnant all this time and how he's been handling Team RWBY. I bet there'd be quite a few critiques but probably not be too harsh on him considering what they've been through together and how he grew up. Yet dismayed at how the 3 girls have turned out, if she was still with him from the beginning they'd probably have significant differences but I'd doubt she'd outright stop Ruby from joining the Chief and I'm almost certain We'd have gotten a "Why We Fight" speech by now. I'm mildly surprised the Master Chief hasn't told them anything about the UNSC, Earth, the Covenant and the Decades long War he fought in defense of humanity. Help put things into Perspective for the Girls...
Though Speaking of Cortana; I'm wondering what John will do when he hears what Salem's Voice sounds like combined with that face of her's. Simplest way for the connection might be If he plays a recording of Cortana and Blake also managed to get from Cinder's memories what Salem Looks and Sounds like, though I doubt she'd immediately comment on such a thing for multiple reasons. If she did however she could probably draw quite the terrifying visage (literally as well she's good at drawing).
John ends up with a winning lotto ticket by pure coincidence, if Cortana was still around she'd be needling him like crazy over it. Funny that the first day going incognito has such a result...
Now in order to cash it in you might consider having John give it to Weiss and have her say that a stranger gave it to her and that she'll share some of it with her team but invest the rest as Weiss is already very famous so a lottery win won't add outrageously to it, been trained how to handle large sums of money thus unlikely to misuse it and you usually have to publically disclose who has a winning ticket (which John will certainly NOT want to do) but being a Megacorp heiress its hard for her to be more (in)famous. Then give a large chunk of it back to John for him to squirrel away and if he's feeling generous give some to Neo.
I do wonder if Blake got any information about Roman Torchwick from Cinder after she died as that could be the hook that gets John informed. If so does The Chief choose to co opt Roman's operation or just bury him; there's advantages to both and since Blake already killed Cinder he might be mildly annoyed he didn't do it but potentially express gratitude, or pretend he's Cinder's new intermediary on the other hand. or even her replacement. If a fight broke out I'd be hilarious if John had a rougher time with Roman than Adam Tarus considering how comparatively easily he dealt with that.
I haven't thought of this much but thinking on Cortana; I wonder what she'd think about what John's been doing on Remnant all this time and how he's been handling Team RWBY. I bet there'd be quite a few critiques but probably not be too harsh on him considering what they've been through together and how he grew up. Yet dismayed at how the 3 girls have turned out, if she was still with him from the beginning they'd probably have significant differences but I'd doubt she'd outright stop Ruby from joining the Chief and I'm almost certain We'd have gotten a "Why We Fight" speech by now. I'm mildly surprised the Master Chief hasn't told them anything about the UNSC, Earth, the Covenant and the Decades long War he fought in defense of humanity. Help put things into Perspective for the Girls...
Though Speaking of Cortana; I'm wondering what John will do when he hears what Salem's Voice sounds like combined with that face of her's. Simplest way for the connection might be If he plays a recording of Cortana and Blake also managed to get from Cinder's memories what Salem Looks and Sounds like, though I doubt she'd immediately comment on such a thing for multiple reasons. If she did however she could probably draw quite the terrifying visage (literally as well she's good at drawing).
12/3/2024 c36
3Fyr RedNight
Absolutely and fantastically brilliant work on the last dozen or so of chapters!
I have no exact idea where all of this is heading, besides some places I wouldn't bet on, but I'm sure looking forward to find out!

Absolutely and fantastically brilliant work on the last dozen or so of chapters!
I have no exact idea where all of this is heading, besides some places I wouldn't bet on, but I'm sure looking forward to find out!
12/2/2024 c36 atengawchok
Give her 1/3 or 1/4 of the winnings. If a large winning the the latter, lol! Can't wait to see the next chapter. Good job!
Give her 1/3 or 1/4 of the winnings. If a large winning the the latter, lol! Can't wait to see the next chapter. Good job!
12/1/2024 c36
31blaiseingfire
I can't tell if Yang's bright and cheery-ness is genuine or if she's faking it.
Considering RWBY's genuine opinion towards huntsmen now, I'm leaning towards it being fake.

I can't tell if Yang's bright and cheery-ness is genuine or if she's faking it.
Considering RWBY's genuine opinion towards huntsmen now, I'm leaning towards it being fake.
11/30/2024 c36
2merendinoemiliano
Cute use of the girls, cannot wait to see more. Also forgot to Say It last time, my condolences

Cute use of the girls, cannot wait to see more. Also forgot to Say It last time, my condolences
11/29/2024 c36 hzchb11
Two hyper lethal people with little to no words being buddy? Oh that's cute... Deadly cute
Two hyper lethal people with little to no words being buddy? Oh that's cute... Deadly cute