for Izuku- The Hexblade Hero7/11/2019 c3 
4hakon2feb
Hi.
So... An Odachi, is it? I'm hoping you aren't planning on Izuku using that in the future, right? Because an odachi has a blade length of at least 90 cm, and that's just ridiculous for someone who isn't even 1,70 m tall :p
Also, if the patron is going to use Izuku's body from time to time, then i really hope it's for the right reasons. Namely, getting chicks. No fun if it' just going to laze around on the couch or something :p
Keep up the good work :)
hakon2feb.
4hakon2febHi.
So... An Odachi, is it? I'm hoping you aren't planning on Izuku using that in the future, right? Because an odachi has a blade length of at least 90 cm, and that's just ridiculous for someone who isn't even 1,70 m tall :p
Also, if the patron is going to use Izuku's body from time to time, then i really hope it's for the right reasons. Namely, getting chicks. No fun if it' just going to laze around on the couch or something :p
Keep up the good work :)
hakon2feb.
7/11/2019 c2 hakon2feb
Hi.
Wasn't the plan to make Izuku level 6/20 or whatever before the academy started? All i can say is that it seems Izuku didn't have much chance to practice anything if he's this low on confidence... It seems you wanted to set up most of the same scenes as canon, but i'm crossing my fingers that things will start to diverge soon :)
Keep up the good work :)
hakon2feb.
Hi.
Wasn't the plan to make Izuku level 6/20 or whatever before the academy started? All i can say is that it seems Izuku didn't have much chance to practice anything if he's this low on confidence... It seems you wanted to set up most of the same scenes as canon, but i'm crossing my fingers that things will start to diverge soon :)
Keep up the good work :)
hakon2feb.
7/11/2019 c1 hakon2feb
Hi.
Really liked the first chapter of this story, and as i found it in the favorites of Magnus9284 (the author of Cursed Blood) i figured it was worth a read :)
Since you have marked the story as Adventure/humor i find it fitting that All Might is a bit wishy washy at this point. If he and his predecessors have been fighting All For One for as long as i suspect then it's only natural that he wouldn't be too concerned. Remember that Tokoyami has control of a crazy shadow creature that gets stronger in the dark, and he's allowed to be trained as a hero ;)
As for Izuku, i figured his reaction to all of this is quite natural. He's a bit too idealistic in the beginning, and doesn't really understand the consequences of power (does any one of us understand?). It should be fun to see how he adapts some of the DnD skills to hero work though :)
Keep up the good work :)
hakon2feb.
Hi.
Really liked the first chapter of this story, and as i found it in the favorites of Magnus9284 (the author of Cursed Blood) i figured it was worth a read :)
Since you have marked the story as Adventure/humor i find it fitting that All Might is a bit wishy washy at this point. If he and his predecessors have been fighting All For One for as long as i suspect then it's only natural that he wouldn't be too concerned. Remember that Tokoyami has control of a crazy shadow creature that gets stronger in the dark, and he's allowed to be trained as a hero ;)
As for Izuku, i figured his reaction to all of this is quite natural. He's a bit too idealistic in the beginning, and doesn't really understand the consequences of power (does any one of us understand?). It should be fun to see how he adapts some of the DnD skills to hero work though :)
Keep up the good work :)
hakon2feb.
7/7/2019 c9 9Emrys Akayuki
They're gonna have to have a class conversation about just who of them know magic or about magic At some point.
9Emrys AkayukiThey're gonna have to have a class conversation about just who of them know magic or about magic At some point.
7/5/2019 c9 AzureDominon
Did you intentional make it so the name Thou Whom Agony is Time can be said as TWAT
Did you intentional make it so the name Thou Whom Agony is Time can be said as TWAT
7/5/2019 c9 9Vedahzii
I ran into the same problem when right my stories, your best bet is to focus on the fights that your main character, and mine side characters are doing, it should help with the work loud. anyway love the chapter hope to see more soon
9VedahziiI ran into the same problem when right my stories, your best bet is to focus on the fights that your main character, and mine side characters are doing, it should help with the work loud. anyway love the chapter hope to see more soon
7/4/2019 c9 Koncor the great
Humm fight two was alright but honestly it had a few shortcomings like the lack of detail on exactly what dark shadow was doing to momo and ida and honestly I would have loved a bit of a fight between almight and dark shadow as fumakage was a literal meatsuit to be controlled by his quirk. That said you did good.
Humm fight two was alright but honestly it had a few shortcomings like the lack of detail on exactly what dark shadow was doing to momo and ida and honestly I would have loved a bit of a fight between almight and dark shadow as fumakage was a literal meatsuit to be controlled by his quirk. That said you did good.
7/4/2019 c9 joshua.obryan.549
there is a saying that really says it all... Beware the Quiet Ones
like legit they are terrifying
there is a saying that really says it all... Beware the Quiet Ones
like legit they are terrifying
7/4/2019 c9 19Magnus9284
Almost expected Tsuyu to be a Shadow Monk.
You probably use a better transition between changes of POV, or at least use the line separation.
19Magnus9284Almost expected Tsuyu to be a Shadow Monk.
You probably use a better transition between changes of POV, or at least use the line separation.
6/30/2019 c1 coduss
Damn, 6 levels in only 10 months, thats one hell of a work out plan. it's been like, a year in my current campaign and i've only gone up...about 2 or 3 levels.
Damn, 6 levels in only 10 months, thats one hell of a work out plan. it's been like, a year in my current campaign and i've only gone up...about 2 or 3 levels.
6/27/2019 c8 Guest
Was Jagakure speaking Thieves' Cant? Is she a Rogue?
Was Jagakure speaking Thieves' Cant? Is she a Rogue?
6/26/2019 c8 Daimyo D
tooru is rogue thief arche type and was using theives cant, kaminari may be a sorcerer (storm sorc may be since you used light lure which is in scag book). todoroki could be a wizard or sorc at most maybe. and let me guess jiro will be a bard haha, bakugo seems to be a berserker type barb
tooru is rogue thief arche type and was using theives cant, kaminari may be a sorcerer (storm sorc may be since you used light lure which is in scag book). todoroki could be a wizard or sorc at most maybe. and let me guess jiro will be a bard haha, bakugo seems to be a berserker type barb
6/26/2019 c8 19bigdogneversleeps
So, considering the placement of consonants, the irl language is obviously Welsh. As for the D&D language, I would put my money on Sylvan, since that is the fey language. I mean, technically, it could be Druidic but that seems like a trick option. So yeah, Welsh and Sylvan.
Besides that, fun chapter. This story has been one I have kept an eye on, besides I had thought of writing a Deku-lock story with 5e mechanics but didn't pull the trigger because of being unsure how to write the story (though I was going to go with a GOOlock build instead of the Hexblade)
19bigdogneversleepsSo, considering the placement of consonants, the irl language is obviously Welsh. As for the D&D language, I would put my money on Sylvan, since that is the fey language. I mean, technically, it could be Druidic but that seems like a trick option. So yeah, Welsh and Sylvan.
Besides that, fun chapter. This story has been one I have kept an eye on, besides I had thought of writing a Deku-lock story with 5e mechanics but didn't pull the trigger because of being unsure how to write the story (though I was going to go with a GOOlock build instead of the Hexblade)