for In The Flesh5/19/2019 c1 
7reza0807
I like this story for multiple reasons so far. You have a nice style of writing, and the way you write things from Ainz's perspective is well done. The story in itself has a nice feeling to it. It's good to see another fanfic in which he becomes human again. I hope you'll show how this might impact his relationships with others, such as the Guardians and people like Enri. The chapter also has a good length for being the first one, and I hope you'll stick to it; unlike people who only write 2000 or so words per chapter. So yes, I do think this story will become something treasured to all Overlord fanfiction fans.
Oh, and you used the term Bone Daddy; an automatic win.
7reza0807I like this story for multiple reasons so far. You have a nice style of writing, and the way you write things from Ainz's perspective is well done. The story in itself has a nice feeling to it. It's good to see another fanfic in which he becomes human again. I hope you'll show how this might impact his relationships with others, such as the Guardians and people like Enri. The chapter also has a good length for being the first one, and I hope you'll stick to it; unlike people who only write 2000 or so words per chapter. So yes, I do think this story will become something treasured to all Overlord fanfiction fans.
Oh, and you used the term Bone Daddy; an automatic win.
5/18/2019 c1 Guest
poor ainz, so far so good.
poor ainz, so far so good.
5/18/2019 c1 look2019
I liked the chapter!
I liked the chapter!
5/18/2019 c1 PERORONCINO
Ohh I wonder what happens when Albedos finds out that Ainz is now capable of making Babies with her muwahahahaha
Ohh I wonder what happens when Albedos finds out that Ainz is now capable of making Babies with her muwahahahaha
5/18/2019 c1 Guest
great story... looking forward to more chapters
great story... looking forward to more chapters
5/18/2019 c1 Guest
keep it up
keep it up
5/18/2019 c1 RoyalSlayerGamer
While this wouldn’t really work because all of Nazarick NPC’s can sense a special aura on the Supreme One’s. Especially now that Ainz-sama is the only one there, so it’s more evident that it’s I can see it as in “Albedo expects to see her Momonga but sees it’s a filthy worm that came out instead.”But she would figure in a few moments that it’s her why is Albedo there, shouldn’t a Homunculus Maid be stationed there? I mean Ainz-sama has already left the meeting with the guardian’s and she didn’t seem like she wanted to tell him ’s still a few stuff that are bugging me but I still enjoyed it. Please keep it going.
While this wouldn’t really work because all of Nazarick NPC’s can sense a special aura on the Supreme One’s. Especially now that Ainz-sama is the only one there, so it’s more evident that it’s I can see it as in “Albedo expects to see her Momonga but sees it’s a filthy worm that came out instead.”But she would figure in a few moments that it’s her why is Albedo there, shouldn’t a Homunculus Maid be stationed there? I mean Ainz-sama has already left the meeting with the guardian’s and she didn’t seem like she wanted to tell him ’s still a few stuff that are bugging me but I still enjoyed it. Please keep it going.
5/18/2019 c1 Onii-Chan 69
I am very interested on how this will play out, looking forward to the next chapter.
I am very interested on how this will play out, looking forward to the next chapter.
5/18/2019 c1 lucarioDN
this is going to be wait for the next chapter
so you can say that ainz is in a human body ? and still as the racial level passives ? and in is player car is missing 10 lv in racial and 35 job lv . i like to tink he as a sort of ruler job that make is actiing so great.
this is going to be wait for the next chapter
so you can say that ainz is in a human body ? and still as the racial level passives ? and in is player car is missing 10 lv in racial and 35 job lv . i like to tink he as a sort of ruler job that make is actiing so great.