for The Mannis with a Plannis8/8/2019 c14 Rex
My guess is that he will use the Stepstones as a nexus for his fleets. From there he can control the sea routes to Westeros. Bonus points if he convinces Bravos and the rest of the free cities to back him up. It also serves to block the Golden Company and fAegon from landing.
My guess is that he will use the Stepstones as a nexus for his fleets. From there he can control the sea routes to Westeros. Bonus points if he convinces Bravos and the rest of the free cities to back him up. It also serves to block the Golden Company and fAegon from landing.
8/7/2019 c2 
136thfloormadness
Oh...I was hoping the first chapter was a one time mistake. You did it here too which implies the rest of the fic will have the same problem. Different characters speaking each get their own paragraph. Also, what's with commas being outside the quotation marks for speech? That is very much not correct.
136thfloormadnessOh...I was hoping the first chapter was a one time mistake. You did it here too which implies the rest of the fic will have the same problem. Different characters speaking each get their own paragraph. Also, what's with commas being outside the quotation marks for speech? That is very much not correct.
8/7/2019 c1 6thfloormadness
The conversation between Stannis and Cressan was a pain to read. You're supposed to start a new paragraph anytime you switch speakers.
The conversation between Stannis and Cressan was a pain to read. You're supposed to start a new paragraph anytime you switch speakers.
8/6/2019 c10 SalemTheSpeakerOfTruth
So, could you just not think of how to have Stannis and Bloodraven sort out their issues, or what? You can't just say "And then they sat down and had an hours long conversation where they sorted many important things out.". That's lazy!
So, could you just not think of how to have Stannis and Bloodraven sort out their issues, or what? You can't just say "And then they sat down and had an hours long conversation where they sorted many important things out.". That's lazy!
8/6/2019 c14 Cdawg24103
Loving the story but I just looked at your profile to see if you posted any new stories and saw that you had deleted your star wars story. Just wondering why and if you are planning on re-uploading it or maybe replacing it. That's all and thanks for the great reads.
Loving the story but I just looked at your profile to see if you posted any new stories and saw that you had deleted your star wars story. Just wondering why and if you are planning on re-uploading it or maybe replacing it. That's all and thanks for the great reads.