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4najex
Having let the story sink in for nigh I do think the stuff with Millesandre is a but mush. I mean, how come the SI is some kind of sex god that can turn an experienced 400 year old women into pudding? Also, what was that stuff about Melody? I don't remember that stuff about Millesandre from the books.
I also thought that the gift of warging was hereditary. that gift must be cultivated but it is also an inborn talent. How come you think Stannis has that talent?
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4najexHaving let the story sink in for nigh I do think the stuff with Millesandre is a but mush. I mean, how come the SI is some kind of sex god that can turn an experienced 400 year old women into pudding? Also, what was that stuff about Melody? I don't remember that stuff about Millesandre from the books.
I also thought that the gift of warging was hereditary. that gift must be cultivated but it is also an inborn talent. How come you think Stannis has that talent?
Remember: nitpickingcaring
8/5/2019 c14 najex
Nice story!
Do all of your SI-stories have to be male? If not, I am curious what a Cersei Lannister SI would look like. Just a thought.
Nice story!
Do all of your SI-stories have to be male? If not, I am curious what a Cersei Lannister SI would look like. Just a thought.
8/4/2019 c14 Guest
love it
love it
8/4/2019 c14 NeedingOfLifeGoalDude
Question, while reading again chapter 6, the Faceless Men didn't ask a price at that time ... Normally, one has to negotiate a price equivalent to the person's importantly death, so I asked, what mighty be as price to the Faceless Man to kill someone like Bloodraven?
Question, while reading again chapter 6, the Faceless Men didn't ask a price at that time ... Normally, one has to negotiate a price equivalent to the person's importantly death, so I asked, what mighty be as price to the Faceless Man to kill someone like Bloodraven?
8/4/2019 c14 Guest
great story
great story
8/4/2019 c14 ama mandy
Simplemente hermoso. Me encanta que Mannis tenga pólvora, ahora si chao dragones.
Simplemente hermoso. Me encanta que Mannis tenga pólvora, ahora si chao dragones.
8/3/2019 c14 Guest
I have greatly enjoyed this so far great work man I can barely wait for more
I have greatly enjoyed this so far great work man I can barely wait for more
8/3/2019 c14 1oldtimeydude
The only thing I can say aside from not going too overboard with the guns seeing as developing cannons and eventually hand cannons before moving onto something like muskets and trying to increase their accuracy as the early models were terribly inaccurate, is about the repeating crossbows.
You might want to do some rethinking of some stuff with the repeating crossbows as the handheld versions were highly inaccurate and had very little penetrating power with many using poison on the tips to kill instead of the arrows. There were larger versions attached to wagons that used wheel crank power and naval ships that were used militarily but I'm unsure as to how powerful they were compared to the smaller versions that were used mostly by civilians presumably for home defense considering you had to poison the bolts to actually try and kill someone with it.
So the crossbow might be more of a trinket than a real weapon until bigger versions are made.
1oldtimeydudeThe only thing I can say aside from not going too overboard with the guns seeing as developing cannons and eventually hand cannons before moving onto something like muskets and trying to increase their accuracy as the early models were terribly inaccurate, is about the repeating crossbows.
You might want to do some rethinking of some stuff with the repeating crossbows as the handheld versions were highly inaccurate and had very little penetrating power with many using poison on the tips to kill instead of the arrows. There were larger versions attached to wagons that used wheel crank power and naval ships that were used militarily but I'm unsure as to how powerful they were compared to the smaller versions that were used mostly by civilians presumably for home defense considering you had to poison the bolts to actually try and kill someone with it.
So the crossbow might be more of a trinket than a real weapon until bigger versions are made.
8/2/2019 c14 mickeysofine
I'd like a Northern perspective of Stannis, especially a first impression based on the siege of Storm's End.
The warning to Robert was a little half-ass. You could've had Robert disregard him completely, it just seems like Stannis wasn't trying at all.
I did like the first Stannis scene here with Qyburn, it helps show how bizarre Stannis comes across.
I'd like a Northern perspective of Stannis, especially a first impression based on the siege of Storm's End.
The warning to Robert was a little half-ass. You could've had Robert disregard him completely, it just seems like Stannis wasn't trying at all.
I did like the first Stannis scene here with Qyburn, it helps show how bizarre Stannis comes across.
8/2/2019 c14 Pacman
A Rubik Cube?
A Rubik Cube?