for ily, wbu?3/25/2021 c4 
1xkell
I don't leave reviews very often at all (orz), especially on this dusty old account, but I had to comment something. I love this chapter too much. Momo's already starting to become an awkward mess with this and I love it lol, especially with her chats with Kido and her asking Hibiya if she was dense
I can just imagine who-knows how many awkward situations she'll probably stumble into, and if anyone else will catch on to her feelings so far. I've been loving this story so far and I definitely can't wait to see what happens next!
1xkellI don't leave reviews very often at all (orz), especially on this dusty old account, but I had to comment something. I love this chapter too much. Momo's already starting to become an awkward mess with this and I love it lol, especially with her chats with Kido and her asking Hibiya if she was dense
I can just imagine who-knows how many awkward situations she'll probably stumble into, and if anyone else will catch on to her feelings so far. I've been loving this story so far and I definitely can't wait to see what happens next!
11/20/2020 c2 72TheTrueOverlordBear
Ooh, it continues! And again, such nice developments! Also, more textmates! Oh, and I'm really admiring how detailed you are about Momo's idol life as well! Though to be honest, I also wonder about how much Momo, Hibiya, and the rest of the Dan have to deal with power control problems now. Maybe they won't be as frequent as before, but the rarity would also make any newer instances stand out, no? Perhaps that can be something to write about for next time, then, particularly for some rising action or climax parts?
72TheTrueOverlordBearOoh, it continues! And again, such nice developments! Also, more textmates! Oh, and I'm really admiring how detailed you are about Momo's idol life as well! Though to be honest, I also wonder about how much Momo, Hibiya, and the rest of the Dan have to deal with power control problems now. Maybe they won't be as frequent as before, but the rarity would also make any newer instances stand out, no? Perhaps that can be something to write about for next time, then, particularly for some rising action or climax parts?
2/20/2020 c1 Guest
The interactions between these two are very cute.
The texting format was also very good.
The interactions between these two are very cute.
The texting format was also very good.
5/22/2019 c1 72TheTrueOverlordBear
HibiMomo and pretty much other age difference pairings are unconventional to me, but I do know of real ones that worked well, so I guess I shouldn't be too weirded out. That, and the chemistry those two have and the chaos of teenage years can make Hibiya look like he has an alternate route with Momo, hahaha! I can even imagine him half-joking "I'll marry you when you're too old to be an idol who's exclusive to everyone."
72TheTrueOverlordBearHibiMomo and pretty much other age difference pairings are unconventional to me, but I do know of real ones that worked well, so I guess I shouldn't be too weirded out. That, and the chemistry those two have and the chaos of teenage years can make Hibiya look like he has an alternate route with Momo, hahaha! I can even imagine him half-joking "I'll marry you when you're too old to be an idol who's exclusive to everyone."