for Heart of the Blessed8/27 c60 Guest
I enjoyed this story. Have you guys abandoned it?
I enjoyed this story. Have you guys abandoned it?
8/26 c60 Guest
Enjoyed this story. Has it been abandoned
Enjoyed this story. Has it been abandoned
6/30 c1 Halofanreach
I think the reason people have beef with this is you had jon fall in love with deanarys when he swore to stannis who gave him the stark name who helped get his home back who sees him like a son but he seems to forget that she kills a bunch of his friends tortures him if you wanted to have jon romance someone it should have been sansa or some other northern woman if you can you should redo the story and fix this huge problem
I think the reason people have beef with this is you had jon fall in love with deanarys when he swore to stannis who gave him the stark name who helped get his home back who sees him like a son but he seems to forget that she kills a bunch of his friends tortures him if you wanted to have jon romance someone it should have been sansa or some other northern woman if you can you should redo the story and fix this huge problem
5/5 c60 Robert Doran
Oh I am greedey for more
Oh I am greedey for more
5/4 c40 Guest
only the wise people can tell that LittleFinger is up to somerthing that will only benefit is a wall bet that wide fire makes him happy.
only the wise people can tell that LittleFinger is up to somerthing that will only benefit is a wall bet that wide fire makes him happy.
5/3 c30 Guest
like in Castle Black in the TV I miss my guess Melisandre a might bring him back for dario may the fleas and lice of a thousand sick monkeys fill his skin driving him mad with the unrelenting itch.
like in Castle Black in the TV I miss my guess Melisandre a might bring him back for dario may the fleas and lice of a thousand sick monkeys fill his skin driving him mad with the unrelenting itch.
3/31 c43 Michaelkoc1
Really disappointed in this story. The first half was interesting and mostly well written and i got hooked, the second half has been the opposite. Weird plot, poor writing, poor grammar and cringe dialogue. The biggest critique i have is the quality of the writing. Its impressive how long this story is but sooooo much more time is needed to fix the grammar mistakes. Theres also several places where characters have interactions or something happens and then later in the chapter or a few chapters later its clear the author has forgotten and the story contradicts itself. The end to this chapter was just absurd and is where i have to stop reading.
I know this review has been negative but if there is one thing to take away its just to take more time editing and rereading what you write to avoid grammar errors. That alone would vastly improve this story. I have to assume the authors first language is not english
Really disappointed in this story. The first half was interesting and mostly well written and i got hooked, the second half has been the opposite. Weird plot, poor writing, poor grammar and cringe dialogue. The biggest critique i have is the quality of the writing. Its impressive how long this story is but sooooo much more time is needed to fix the grammar mistakes. Theres also several places where characters have interactions or something happens and then later in the chapter or a few chapters later its clear the author has forgotten and the story contradicts itself. The end to this chapter was just absurd and is where i have to stop reading.
I know this review has been negative but if there is one thing to take away its just to take more time editing and rereading what you write to avoid grammar errors. That alone would vastly improve this story. I have to assume the authors first language is not english
3/22 c17 Shippen2000
Stannis is the one who has the highest claim.
He was named heir and given Dragonstone by Robert Baratheon, even if he was a Usuper.
So after Roberto dies and its revealed to Westeros that Cersei Lannister shags her brother, he is the true king.
Stannis is the one who has the highest claim.
He was named heir and given Dragonstone by Robert Baratheon, even if he was a Usuper.
So after Roberto dies and its revealed to Westeros that Cersei Lannister shags her brother, he is the true king.
1/17 c59 
1I-Love-Trunks1
I love the pairing Jon/Daenerys! They are so cute and adorable together! I like how Jon bent the knee to Stannis at Castle Black. I like how Jon and Daenerys slowly got to know each other. I like how Daenerys wanted to bring Jon back to life when he died. I like how they both slowly fell in love each other. I like how Jon chose to side with Daenerys. I love the smut and fluff. I was fangirling. I hate Cersei! Daenerys is my favorite character! Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I hope you keep writing it.
1I-Love-Trunks1I love the pairing Jon/Daenerys! They are so cute and adorable together! I like how Jon bent the knee to Stannis at Castle Black. I like how Jon and Daenerys slowly got to know each other. I like how Daenerys wanted to bring Jon back to life when he died. I like how they both slowly fell in love each other. I like how Jon chose to side with Daenerys. I love the smut and fluff. I was fangirling. I hate Cersei! Daenerys is my favorite character! Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I hope you keep writing it.
1/5 c59 1Kriz03
Sooo close to achieving peace!…sigh. I was hoping there would be peace for a little bit longer before more chaos. Little Finger/Tyrion’s scheme cane to fruition faster than I expected. Ahh, i can’t wait to see the strategies each side will use in the coming battle. Thanks for the update
1Kriz03Sooo close to achieving peace!…sigh. I was hoping there would be peace for a little bit longer before more chaos. Little Finger/Tyrion’s scheme cane to fruition faster than I expected. Ahh, i can’t wait to see the strategies each side will use in the coming battle. Thanks for the update
10/31/2023 c59 House Awesome
I enjoyed this chapter. I look forward to ch:60.
It'd be interesting if Stanis found the crossbowmen who betrayed the treaty meeting. And comes to realize that Daenerys didn't actually betray those terms, and has to fight a battle that no one wanted, but who betrayed him. Who he still doesn't know the identity of. Which is making him paranoid with his own council and those around him.
But I'm not the writer. I know nothing!
Cheers!
I enjoyed this chapter. I look forward to ch:60.
It'd be interesting if Stanis found the crossbowmen who betrayed the treaty meeting. And comes to realize that Daenerys didn't actually betray those terms, and has to fight a battle that no one wanted, but who betrayed him. Who he still doesn't know the identity of. Which is making him paranoid with his own council and those around him.
But I'm not the writer. I know nothing!
Cheers!
10/30/2023 c59 5Warden of Lore
i truly dont believe that eother stannis or dany would be this stupid.
5Warden of Lorei truly dont believe that eother stannis or dany would be this stupid.