for The Best Laid Plans5/10 c165 
7JPAnderson
Why doesn't harry cast his mother's patronus in the great hall during breakfast to find the LV possessed student?
7JPAndersonWhy doesn't harry cast his mother's patronus in the great hall during breakfast to find the LV possessed student?
5/8 c169 N. A. Wennerholm
I think it is time to have whatever deity or entity all the Witches and Wizards believe in show up at Both the School and The Ministry For magic to make an announcement on how disappointed they are in all the Pureblood supremacists that they are going against them in their decision as to who gets magic and who does not. And that if they continue down the path, they are they will be the ones to lose their magic and they will not get it back, and many generations after with also be denied. So their descendants will have to prove themselves to get it back there, they will no longer go against Lady Mother Magic or whatever. And Said announcements will be broadcast over the WWN Wizarding Wireless Network and the transcript published threw all News press publications that receive. Because said entities would make their displeasure quite clear. Include the situations concerning their squibs and all non-magicals as well. even go so far as to point out that there is an deity entity above them and that said being is written about in the Judeo Christian Bible. That should be a big enough shock to Those pieces of shit within the Magical Community.
I think it is time to have whatever deity or entity all the Witches and Wizards believe in show up at Both the School and The Ministry For magic to make an announcement on how disappointed they are in all the Pureblood supremacists that they are going against them in their decision as to who gets magic and who does not. And that if they continue down the path, they are they will be the ones to lose their magic and they will not get it back, and many generations after with also be denied. So their descendants will have to prove themselves to get it back there, they will no longer go against Lady Mother Magic or whatever. And Said announcements will be broadcast over the WWN Wizarding Wireless Network and the transcript published threw all News press publications that receive. Because said entities would make their displeasure quite clear. Include the situations concerning their squibs and all non-magicals as well. even go so far as to point out that there is an deity entity above them and that said being is written about in the Judeo Christian Bible. That should be a big enough shock to Those pieces of shit within the Magical Community.
5/7 c169 3alix33
You meant "first gen reappeared", "was the Carrow twins" and "provide us with our parents' possessions".
"pushback" should be one word, according to collinsdictionary dot com.
3alix33You meant "first gen reappeared", "was the Carrow twins" and "provide us with our parents' possessions".
"pushback" should be one word, according to collinsdictionary dot com.
5/5 c45 1Boomshanka
Once again, ten chapters of romance, and one chapter of Harry being screwed again and again and again? What the heck is this fix? Do the so called romance writers tgink it is more romantic the more the hero is tortured?
1BoomshankaOnce again, ten chapters of romance, and one chapter of Harry being screwed again and again and again? What the heck is this fix? Do the so called romance writers tgink it is more romantic the more the hero is tortured?
5/4 c14 Boomshanka
Why the heck does every Romance fic make Harry a doormat? And why does Snape never get his just rewards?
Do the romance writers think the more the hero is abused the more romantic it will be?!
Why the heck does every Romance fic make Harry a doormat? And why does Snape never get his just rewards?
Do the romance writers think the more the hero is abused the more romantic it will be?!
5/4 c13 Boomshanka
Harry came just under Hagrid's chest? Hagrid's 12 feet tall. If Harry comes just under his chest, then Harry's 8 feet at least!
Harry came just under Hagrid's chest? Hagrid's 12 feet tall. If Harry comes just under his chest, then Harry's 8 feet at least!
4/25 c168 1GenesisYD
Me encatooooooo esté capitulo. Espero con ansias el próximo ️ Gracias por actualizar
1GenesisYDMe encatooooooo esté capitulo. Espero con ansias el próximo ️ Gracias por actualizar
4/23 c168 3alix33
You meant "the Malfoys, the Malfoys' money", "along the fourth floor" and "to volunteer to use magic to prove".
"self-preservation" needed a hyphen, according to merriam hyphen webster dot com.
"devil-may-care" should get hyphens throughout, according to collinsdictionary dot com.
So, the Parkinsons kidnapped Colin, possibly along with the horcrux of Tom Riddle junior in that Slytherin girl and they're potioning up Colin to do something horrid?
3alix33You meant "the Malfoys, the Malfoys' money", "along the fourth floor" and "to volunteer to use magic to prove".
"self-preservation" needed a hyphen, according to merriam hyphen webster dot com.
"devil-may-care" should get hyphens throughout, according to collinsdictionary dot com.
So, the Parkinsons kidnapped Colin, possibly along with the horcrux of Tom Riddle junior in that Slytherin girl and they're potioning up Colin to do something horrid?