for False Start10/18/2020 c20 Vera
The very long chapters make it difficult to write intelligent reviews. I'm to exhausted even to think what to say ( because I'm to old).
The very long chapters make it difficult to write intelligent reviews. I'm to exhausted even to think what to say ( because I'm to old).
10/18/2020 c21 Vera
Is this it?
I must say, some of your characters have a great sense of humour that makes one reading, even a very long chapter like this one.
Is this it?
I must say, some of your characters have a great sense of humour that makes one reading, even a very long chapter like this one.
10/17/2020 c18 Vera
I like The way you keep building the characters and sticking to what they are.
I like The way you keep building the characters and sticking to what they are.
10/16/2020 c17 Vera
I'm still reading with interest
I'm still reading with interest
10/10/2020 c12 Vera
I read This chapter 2x! Giving you Big A
I read This chapter 2x! Giving you Big A
10/8/2020 c11 Vera
Flame picked it up, but Julia felt it in her paw?
Now you put the two more together?
Flame picked it up, but Julia felt it in her paw?
Now you put the two more together?
10/8/2020 c10 Vera
Finaly Well put description of humans.
Very good Reading, I sure like to read on
Finaly Well put description of humans.
Very good Reading, I sure like to read on
10/7/2020 c9 Vera
Like the explanation of how society works.
Like the explanation of how society works.
10/6/2020 c8 Vera
The story is well developing, I want to keep on reading
The story is well developing, I want to keep on reading
10/6/2020 c7 Vera
Don't understand how Julia got into the guild.
Don't understand how Julia got into the guild.
10/5/2020 c5 Vera
I'm lucking more dramatic moment when Drowzee found with the boy. Also when Magnezone arrived, more involment, more drama and Description of what krimes Drowzee committed.
I'm lucking more dramatic moment when Drowzee found with the boy. Also when Magnezone arrived, more involment, more drama and Description of what krimes Drowzee committed.
10/5/2020 c5 Vera
As you see, I keep reading, although my eyes hurt.
Good story
As you see, I keep reading, although my eyes hurt.
Good story
10/5/2020 c4 Vera
Now I get it. Well done
Now I get it. Well done
10/4/2020 c3 Vera
Well introduced two more characters
Well introduced two more characters
7/22/2020 c21 Vra
This is a marathon chapter, but I kept reading as it is a good reading!
This is a marathon chapter, but I kept reading as it is a good reading!