for Return of the Alterans5/3/2023 c8 CliveVb
It's not too late. This story can still be completed. So do us all a favour. Please complete this story I really enjoyed reading it.
It's not too late. This story can still be completed. So do us all a favour. Please complete this story I really enjoyed reading it.
1/17/2023 c8 GreedElff
This is a great story; I only just came across it as I am relatively new to the site. Sad to see it hasn't been updated in such a long time. Couldn't stop reading it once I started.
This is a great story; I only just came across it as I am relatively new to the site. Sad to see it hasn't been updated in such a long time. Couldn't stop reading it once I started.
9/18/2022 c8 
4viningc
I look forward to your next chapter. At the rate you are going, you will have all 3 galnaxies as well as the Ori universe pacified before very much more time has past. I am anxiously awaiting your next published chapter.
4viningcI look forward to your next chapter. At the rate you are going, you will have all 3 galnaxies as well as the Ori universe pacified before very much more time has past. I am anxiously awaiting your next published chapter.
9/18/2022 c7 viningc
I recently found your cross-over FanFiction and have found it quite fascinating. Since you last Updated this Nov 9, 2020, I am reviewing your story in the hope that you are reminded that you have fans anxiously awaiting their ‘monthly’ updates.
To me the further progression of the story seems fairly straight forward but it would still be enjoyable to read your take on the Universeyou have created. I look forward to reading more as you are able to publish it.
I recently found your cross-over FanFiction and have found it quite fascinating. Since you last Updated this Nov 9, 2020, I am reviewing your story in the hope that you are reminded that you have fans anxiously awaiting their ‘monthly’ updates.
To me the further progression of the story seems fairly straight forward but it would still be enjoyable to read your take on the Universeyou have created. I look forward to reading more as you are able to publish it.
8/24/2022 c1 Do not mind my dumb comments
Who cares that dumbasadoor feeling guilty. He knew better! Hopefully Harry stays away from dumbasadoor and his minions that includes the gold digging fame seeking weasels! Also stay away from death eaters, voldy,and snape because they are no good and are a bunch of rapist, killers,child abusers,and bullies. The Order of the flying chicken is no better as well! Nothing but usless people that are not willing to kill during war time!
Who cares that dumbasadoor feeling guilty. He knew better! Hopefully Harry stays away from dumbasadoor and his minions that includes the gold digging fame seeking weasels! Also stay away from death eaters, voldy,and snape because they are no good and are a bunch of rapist, killers,child abusers,and bullies. The Order of the flying chicken is no better as well! Nothing but usless people that are not willing to kill during war time!