for A Man Without Honor9/11/2022 c13 Makanie
Poor Myrcella is dead. I wonder what Jaime will be doing now. And what is Clegane going to do with Ned?
Poor Myrcella is dead. I wonder what Jaime will be doing now. And what is Clegane going to do with Ned?
5/5/2022 c12 Guest
This story has become a mess.
This story has become a mess.
3/17/2022 c5 Guest
I’m surprised Jaime and Brandon would allow Jon to join the Watch again.
I’m surprised Jaime and Brandon would allow Jon to join the Watch again.
3/17/2022 c2 Guest
"He brought sin to our place of worship. He rampaged it with wine and vulgarity, turning it akin to a whorehouse."
Catelyn never respected the Old Gods, she worshipped the Seven.
"He brought sin to our place of worship. He rampaged it with wine and vulgarity, turning it akin to a whorehouse."
Catelyn never respected the Old Gods, she worshipped the Seven.
12/31/2021 c7 
15Andromedanaea
Jamie's doing a horrible job of making a Stark-Lannister Alliance. Part of the problem is that he doesn't know enough to convince anyone of the truth. He need Tyrion's help
15AndromedanaeaJamie's doing a horrible job of making a Stark-Lannister Alliance. Part of the problem is that he doesn't know enough to convince anyone of the truth. He need Tyrion's help
5/12/2021 c5 1sarah-rose76646
Some advice as someone who has read thousands of fanfiction stories in the last 18 years...
1. Don't keep the plot so mysterious that nothing gets cleared till the end of chapter 5.
2. Don't invent too many plot twists. Keep a few, keep them simple and not overly-elaborated that blindsides people.
3. It's frustrating to read a story where nobody works together and everything stays unresolved.
For the future, good luck.
1sarah-rose76646Some advice as someone who has read thousands of fanfiction stories in the last 18 years...
1. Don't keep the plot so mysterious that nothing gets cleared till the end of chapter 5.
2. Don't invent too many plot twists. Keep a few, keep them simple and not overly-elaborated that blindsides people.
3. It's frustrating to read a story where nobody works together and everything stays unresolved.
For the future, good luck.
5/10/2021 c5 15Andromedanaea
Great story so far. But I don't understand why Robert thinks exposing Joffrey's madness now will hurt his legacy worse than the reign of Mad King Joffrey. Doesn't he realise Joffrey will do worse when no one can stop him?
Any Jamie need to stop screwing around and tell everyone everything they need to know.
I really don't want to read a repeat of cannon, narrated by Jamie anguishing about how can he let this repeat.
15AndromedanaeaGreat story so far. But I don't understand why Robert thinks exposing Joffrey's madness now will hurt his legacy worse than the reign of Mad King Joffrey. Doesn't he realise Joffrey will do worse when no one can stop him?
Any Jamie need to stop screwing around and tell everyone everything they need to know.
I really don't want to read a repeat of cannon, narrated by Jamie anguishing about how can he let this repeat.
5/9/2021 c5 7era-romance
srry, didn't get to finish my post. anyway, while he's mentioned at the end of this chapter, would Jamie not have thought of rhaegars son as the FIRST person to get on his side given the whole prince who was promised prophecy and all? things are pretty much going as can9n with slight exceptions so isn't really worth the read, yet. if the author actually completes the work I'll read it then but fir now? not worth the time
7era-romancesrry, didn't get to finish my post. anyway, while he's mentioned at the end of this chapter, would Jamie not have thought of rhaegars son as the FIRST person to get on his side given the whole prince who was promised prophecy and all? things are pretty much going as can9n with slight exceptions so isn't really worth the read, yet. if the author actually completes the work I'll read it then but fir now? not worth the time
5/9/2021 c5 39jean d'arc
I like that Tommen is staying in Winterfell. And I like his betrothal to Arya. Of course, without the benefit of hindsight, betrothing Sansa to Joffrey is a great opportunity. Now, knowing what happens and what kind of man Joffrey is, Tommen and Arya is a thousand times better!
So, Jon's still going to the Wall :(
Guest, first of all, I meant it as a joke. Secondly, I was referring to the Long Night. All the people I mentioned in my previous review are responsible for the death and destruction it brought about. Robb, Ned, Catelyn, Robert, etc were long dead before it happened and had nothing to do with it. Just like Jon, Dany, the Sand Snakes, etc were miles away and nothing to do with the War of the Five Kings. I'm glad they will take the steps to prevent these circumstances from taking place.
Thanks!
39jean d'arcI like that Tommen is staying in Winterfell. And I like his betrothal to Arya. Of course, without the benefit of hindsight, betrothing Sansa to Joffrey is a great opportunity. Now, knowing what happens and what kind of man Joffrey is, Tommen and Arya is a thousand times better!
So, Jon's still going to the Wall :(
Guest, first of all, I meant it as a joke. Secondly, I was referring to the Long Night. All the people I mentioned in my previous review are responsible for the death and destruction it brought about. Robb, Ned, Catelyn, Robert, etc were long dead before it happened and had nothing to do with it. Just like Jon, Dany, the Sand Snakes, etc were miles away and nothing to do with the War of the Five Kings. I'm glad they will take the steps to prevent these circumstances from taking place.
Thanks!