9/12 c30 Guest
Eden zero
Eden zero
10/1/2023 c1 Guest
Why do I get the feeling the girls are eventually gonna say fuck it and bang a random natsu eventually… poor guys neck deep in grubs
Why do I get the feeling the girls are eventually gonna say fuck it and bang a random natsu eventually… poor guys neck deep in grubs
10/1/2023 c30 Guest
Should have sent natsu on a never ending adventure even bloodier and crazier than the girl’s only to end up saving the multiverse and dying saving his!
Should have sent natsu on a never ending adventure even bloodier and crazier than the girl’s only to end up saving the multiverse and dying saving his!
5/19/2023 c30 Medvac
Amazing chapter, maybe for an idea could toss in some karma towards Erza, Mira, and Kagura for Levy’s suffering. Idk maybe they land in a earthland zombie apocalypse with the zombies being Ichiya zombies that eat flesh in order to get the victims parfum, moans out mmmeeeennnn, and can sprint. But when they land in the new universe, they land in someone’s bed room making passion. And reveals to be Natsu, Kagura, and Levy (you probably can make a funny dialogue with Mcgarden saying nice with a knowing and smug look). Then later the group finds out along with the Ichiya zombie apocalypse that Erza and Mira’s doubles are in a relationship with Gajeel or idk fat Droy or someone that they wouldn’t stand seeing their doubles with.
It’s always a pleasure to see new chapters coming out. I was in such a good mood that this idea came to me and seemed to be a fun idea to me. Hopefully it helps.
Amazing chapter, maybe for an idea could toss in some karma towards Erza, Mira, and Kagura for Levy’s suffering. Idk maybe they land in a earthland zombie apocalypse with the zombies being Ichiya zombies that eat flesh in order to get the victims parfum, moans out mmmeeeennnn, and can sprint. But when they land in the new universe, they land in someone’s bed room making passion. And reveals to be Natsu, Kagura, and Levy (you probably can make a funny dialogue with Mcgarden saying nice with a knowing and smug look). Then later the group finds out along with the Ichiya zombie apocalypse that Erza and Mira’s doubles are in a relationship with Gajeel or idk fat Droy or someone that they wouldn’t stand seeing their doubles with.
It’s always a pleasure to see new chapters coming out. I was in such a good mood that this idea came to me and seemed to be a fun idea to me. Hopefully it helps.
5/16/2023 c30 61TheUnknownLegion
This was absolutely amazing! I love it haha! Now, I shall try to work faster on my stuff so I can finally get to the idea with the shifting girls! I do hope I don't take forever in that regard.
This was absolutely amazing! I love it haha! Now, I shall try to work faster on my stuff so I can finally get to the idea with the shifting girls! I do hope I don't take forever in that regard.
5/16/2023 c30 omni867
Question you don’t have to give a yes or no answer but will they eventually warp into there home dimension
Question you don’t have to give a yes or no answer but will they eventually warp into there home dimension
4/9/2023 c29 Medvac
Great chapter, was a lot of fun to read. Definitely re-read the chapter, it’s always nice to remind everyone that the girls earned the right to be Mary Sue’s. Due to all of the shit they had to go through, but there’s always something that is harder to kill than most. Don’t know what’s your plan for the next chapter for shifting but can’t wait.
I could totally see the moment that the girls shift and shifting of the batmobile to the next world. Levy going fast as hell when she shifted. In the next universe she runs over jellal, stops and backs up over on top of him and asks Ultear, meredy, or a random person with a manic grin. “Hey does anyone know where to bar is at” someone points in the direction she is facing, she gives her thanks and slams the throttle down. While jellal’s dead body was underneath the rear tire and flings blood and ripped flesh right at Ezra’s face.
Imagining that scene makes me chuckle a bit. Then being questioned by her friends why she stole the batmobile and Levy’s response would be. “I was on a beer run because I needed alcohol and I kept seeing kagura’s tea talking to her. Plus they didn’t have alcohol, all I had was smoothie’s and that clear liquid stuff that didn’t tasted like alcohol.” You mean water and I wasn’t talking to my tea, kagura answered.
Makes me chuckle a little more.
Great chapter, was a lot of fun to read. Definitely re-read the chapter, it’s always nice to remind everyone that the girls earned the right to be Mary Sue’s. Due to all of the shit they had to go through, but there’s always something that is harder to kill than most. Don’t know what’s your plan for the next chapter for shifting but can’t wait.
I could totally see the moment that the girls shift and shifting of the batmobile to the next world. Levy going fast as hell when she shifted. In the next universe she runs over jellal, stops and backs up over on top of him and asks Ultear, meredy, or a random person with a manic grin. “Hey does anyone know where to bar is at” someone points in the direction she is facing, she gives her thanks and slams the throttle down. While jellal’s dead body was underneath the rear tire and flings blood and ripped flesh right at Ezra’s face.
Imagining that scene makes me chuckle a bit. Then being questioned by her friends why she stole the batmobile and Levy’s response would be. “I was on a beer run because I needed alcohol and I kept seeing kagura’s tea talking to her. Plus they didn’t have alcohol, all I had was smoothie’s and that clear liquid stuff that didn’t tasted like alcohol.” You mean water and I wasn’t talking to my tea, kagura answered.
Makes me chuckle a little more.
4/8/2023 c29 TheUnknownLegion
Fun chapter!
I couldn't help but think that Krograal would have had a blast being there fighting Doomsday despite getting his butt handled to him by the monster every time haha. And he would disagree with Levy about beating up poor people, probably say something like "killing and robbing poor people is a fun pass time to do!" or something of the sorts haha.
Also, unless I read it wrong but Kagura can use her gravity Magic to make herself fly? Cause that's cool.
But yeah, fun chapter!
Fun chapter!
I couldn't help but think that Krograal would have had a blast being there fighting Doomsday despite getting his butt handled to him by the monster every time haha. And he would disagree with Levy about beating up poor people, probably say something like "killing and robbing poor people is a fun pass time to do!" or something of the sorts haha.
Also, unless I read it wrong but Kagura can use her gravity Magic to make herself fly? Cause that's cool.
But yeah, fun chapter!