for Harry Queen6/8/2019 c1 Guest
Good idea just hard to follow in some places and you really don't need the bearers or Carriers/Male pregnancy and the marriage contract have you ever thought of just of having Harry run away at 15 and using some of the money from his vault to build a company and find masters to train him in magic and fighting hand to hand and stuff
Good idea just hard to follow in some places and you really don't need the bearers or Carriers/Male pregnancy and the marriage contract have you ever thought of just of having Harry run away at 15 and using some of the money from his vault to build a company and find masters to train him in magic and fighting hand to hand and stuff
5/30/2019 c1 Guest
Very confusing chat style. Idea is good, work on the technique to write a Story.
Very confusing chat style. Idea is good, work on the technique to write a Story.
5/31/2019 c1 IJustWannaReadEpicStories
this is badly written and messy. the dialogue was extremely disappointing.
this is badly written and messy. the dialogue was extremely disappointing.