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6/8/2019 c1 Guest
Good idea just hard to follow in some places and you really don't need the bearers or Carriers/Male pregnancy and the marriage contract have you ever thought of just of having Harry run away at 15 and using some of the money from his vault to build a company and find masters to train him in magic and fighting hand to hand and stuff
5/30/2019 c1 Guest
Very confusing chat style. Idea is good, work on the technique to write a Story.
5/31/2019 c1 IJustWannaReadEpicStories
this is badly written and messy. the dialogue was extremely disappointing.

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