for The Cabin1/10/2020 c8 OwO
itz okey mi knaw de feelingz. UwU here's a hug
itz okey mi knaw de feelingz. UwU here's a hug
10/30/2019 c7 
1ace-rider99
hey man loved the story had me dieing there for a minute lmao, I got a story I'm currently writing I think you might like if you wanna check it out man.
1ace-rider99hey man loved the story had me dieing there for a minute lmao, I got a story I'm currently writing I think you might like if you wanna check it out man.
9/24/2019 c7 15DisclosedBarrel
The story clearly lacks grammar and punctuation, to be honest. I can read it and sometimes I cannot, probably due to paragraphing and general flow or rhythm. I've grown to prefer the classic "novel" layout, this just isn't doing it for me.
I see potential, this can be a good original story. Some people like them short. Just lacks finesse. A bit more refinement, if you will. A year or two and story making will just snap. Give it time. I went from using a script format to a classic book, it's second instinct. It can be for you too.
I believe this quote might be relevant. "Just jump in and start telling your story. Believe me, no one else can tell it quite the way you will." - Mark Crilley
15DisclosedBarrelThe story clearly lacks grammar and punctuation, to be honest. I can read it and sometimes I cannot, probably due to paragraphing and general flow or rhythm. I've grown to prefer the classic "novel" layout, this just isn't doing it for me.
I see potential, this can be a good original story. Some people like them short. Just lacks finesse. A bit more refinement, if you will. A year or two and story making will just snap. Give it time. I went from using a script format to a classic book, it's second instinct. It can be for you too.
I believe this quote might be relevant. "Just jump in and start telling your story. Believe me, no one else can tell it quite the way you will." - Mark Crilley
9/19/2019 c7 2TickBeard
Never mind the story, how in the hell did you suffer a rod knock in your truck? That is an extremely weird thing to have happen. I mean, I'm no mechanic or anything, but the only other time I've heard of that happening is when someone is changing their oil, doesn't put the filter on properly, and then drives for like a few hours and their engine gets destroyed. I mean, isn't the rod knock the least of your worries? How is the engine in your truck even working at all?! Did it get totaled?
And for the record, I have never heard any farmer call beer "adult beverages". Ever. That's the weirdest thing in this story by far.
PS: You're not the liquor. John Dunsworth is.
2TickBeardNever mind the story, how in the hell did you suffer a rod knock in your truck? That is an extremely weird thing to have happen. I mean, I'm no mechanic or anything, but the only other time I've heard of that happening is when someone is changing their oil, doesn't put the filter on properly, and then drives for like a few hours and their engine gets destroyed. I mean, isn't the rod knock the least of your worries? How is the engine in your truck even working at all?! Did it get totaled?
And for the record, I have never heard any farmer call beer "adult beverages". Ever. That's the weirdest thing in this story by far.
PS: You're not the liquor. John Dunsworth is.
9/19/2019 c1 60Wildebunny the Eternal
This is so grammatically incompetent. Why would you promote this?
60Wildebunny the EternalThis is so grammatically incompetent. Why would you promote this?
7/7/2019 c3 2the king alpha
well...I type these while drink and high but now that people read it I got to put more effort and time
2the king alphawell...I type these while drink and high but now that people read it I got to put more effort and time
7/3/2019 c3 Guest
I have no idea what that was but it was funny as helll also I recommend you use punctuation
I have no idea what that was but it was funny as helll also I recommend you use punctuation