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4/29/2024 c9 E
I'm glad I stopped by and caught up... even if it ends on a cliff hanger. This continued to be good, as I expected. I just wish there was more to read. Also, I suppose this is probably how Garrus' team will die this time lmao. I expect the redshirts won't last long against the Hive, even if it is a really small amount of them. Sword Logic is brutal.

I await more, as always.
2/18/2024 c4 Guest
joker x edi is best ship
6/18/2023 c9 RandynotSavage2
Yo you know what would have been an amazing chapter name a hive of scum and villainy. Or just Hive of scum and villainy. It would have been absolutely hilarious and thought-provoking. Although I can also see why you didn't do it that way because you know the wow and the surprise Factor would be a little lesson for those who figure it out quicker. Anyways great work so far keep up the good work! Also please keep this up.
6/18/2023 c9 Gg Leroy
Amazing Story So Far! Keep up the good work and hopefully please continue!
6/2/2023 c2 simplicity.exe
Cerberus, Miranda, and a character that should ideally be an N7 trained military officer who should probably have some notion of operational security yet chooses to immediately blab about their floating AI ghost ball from another universe, really killed any excitement I had about this fic.
5/25/2023 c9 8Knightwolf1875
Hive of all things to deal with. Well, it is the Hive that go jump worlds after all.
5/16/2023 c9 1myafroatemydog
Pretty good chapter
5/16/2023 c7 myafroatemydog
Pretty great chapter I enjoy this fic
5/16/2023 c6 myafroatemydog
Pretty good chapter
5/16/2023 c5 myafroatemydog
Pretty good chapter
5/16/2023 c5 myafroatemydog
Pretty good chapter
5/16/2023 c2 myafroatemydog
Great follow up chapter
5/16/2023 c3 myafroatemydog
Pretty good chapter
5/16/2023 c1 myafroatemydog
Interesting first chapter
5/15/2023 c9 1CheesusChrist15
Yeesh. Really could have been a lot smoother on that last bit, really made me cringe.
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