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9/9/2019 c15 47burnmedown
Oh goodness, Clay is in such bad shape! But I'm really glad that he has his brothers right there with him and that they will stick with him no matter how long it takes. Can't wait to see how the rest of the story plays out!
9/8/2019 c15 8Issai
I hope that Clay will return to them.. otherwise too many hearts will be broken...
9/8/2019 c15 Chgrgal
A wonderful chapter loved it can’t wait for more.
9/8/2019 c15 2Elise Deschat
Good chapter, Clay is going back home with Bravo, his mission over... the mission is not over for Bravo though and won't be until Clay is restored to them...

Good fill-in chapter... gives hope
9/5/2019 c14 mendenbar
Well that sucks.
9/3/2019 c14 47burnmedown
Yay, another chapter! I liked Jason's point of view here, and his concern for Clay, and the way he interacted with the crew. You've created some good original characters here and I've had fun reading their interactions with Bravo. Can't wait to see how you resolve the situation with Clay and his recovery. As always, thanks for sharing your work with us!
9/2/2019 c14 8Issai
Wow! It's intense! I loved the interaction between Roger and Jason!

I loved bringing up Nate.

Poor Clay... the kid did not need this all to recover from his previous wounds...
9/2/2019 c14 2Elise Deschat
wicked cliffie….
8/29/2019 c14 Guest
Really enjoy your stories. Keep up the great work. Enjoy your time off.
8/29/2019 c14 Shellymae88
Thanks for letting us know! Enjoy your weekend and looking forward to the next chapter!
8/27/2019 c13 47burnmedown
Oh wow, Clay's condition is terrifyingly dire! It's good that he had his brothers there to quickly rescue and take care of him. I can't wait to see how you continue this, with Clay's treatment and recovery and reunion with his team where he gets to be aware of the fact that they came for him and saved him.
8/25/2019 c13 2Elise Deschat
Out of the frying pan into the fire?

How long had it been, since Clay's heart beat and when did he draw his last breath? It might be good water was cold...

Hate cliffies, but angst filled chapter... still holding on with white-knuckled grip
8/25/2019 c13 Chgrgal
Way to go Brits! We always work together. Excellent chapter can’t wait for more.
8/25/2019 c13 KazooKaren
This was so action packed and fast moving. So well written. So glad they found Clay! Can’t wait til he finds out they came for him. Hope you can update soon.
8/25/2019 c13 mendenbar
Glad they found Clay (hurrah for Cerberus once again). But it doesn't look good once again. Kid has more lives than an entire herd of cats.
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