
11/6/2020 c55 Megth
I have no words. This is just so good, though I have tears streaming down my face. Love it.
I have no words. This is just so good, though I have tears streaming down my face. Love it.
11/2/2020 c54 Guest
I think there might be a bit of an issue, with chapters coming through. It says that you have updated and I cannot wait to read it, but there's no new chapter appearing. It might just be me, but this has happened to a few other stories I'm also following. :D
I think there might be a bit of an issue, with chapters coming through. It says that you have updated and I cannot wait to read it, but there's no new chapter appearing. It might just be me, but this has happened to a few other stories I'm also following. :D
11/1/2020 c55 BelunaTH
wow! another amazing chapter! ang i must say it again: you are making it awesome exciting here! Thank you so much!
wow! another amazing chapter! ang i must say it again: you are making it awesome exciting here! Thank you so much!
10/25/2020 c54
47burnmedown
Ooh, I’d been eagerly waiting to see how things would play out when the rest of Bravo learned what happened, and this definitely did not disappoint. Sonny’s anger rang very true to who he is and how he usually reacts when he is scared or hurting. Thank you for the update; looking forward to the next!

Ooh, I’d been eagerly waiting to see how things would play out when the rest of Bravo learned what happened, and this definitely did not disappoint. Sonny’s anger rang very true to who he is and how he usually reacts when he is scared or hurting. Thank you for the update; looking forward to the next!
10/25/2020 c53 burnmedown
Man, Jason’s worry came through so clearly here. I really felt for him, and his thoughts truly showed how much Clay means to him. Enjoyed his interactions with Chester, and can’t wait to see what comes next!
Man, Jason’s worry came through so clearly here. I really felt for him, and his thoughts truly showed how much Clay means to him. Enjoyed his interactions with Chester, and can’t wait to see what comes next!
10/18/2020 c54 Guest
Ok this is so heartbreaking! I think I’m probably more upset than Sonny! Wish I had a magic wond to wave over Clay because I think it is about time he deserves a miracle! Been a tough year for him! Amazing writing! I don’t have enough good words to complement you on how you absolutely “pull” the readers into the lives and emotions of the characters! Amazing! Please write soon!
Ok this is so heartbreaking! I think I’m probably more upset than Sonny! Wish I had a magic wond to wave over Clay because I think it is about time he deserves a miracle! Been a tough year for him! Amazing writing! I don’t have enough good words to complement you on how you absolutely “pull” the readers into the lives and emotions of the characters! Amazing! Please write soon!
10/19/2020 c54 Irish1969
Damn 6 is a trouble magnet. I feel as bad for his brothers as I do for him. Awesome story.
Damn 6 is a trouble magnet. I feel as bad for his brothers as I do for him. Awesome story.
10/17/2020 c52
47burnmedown
The team interaction/rapport in this chapter was fun to read. Loved the detail of Clay helping Jason’s kids with their homework; it’s the kind of thing I could definitely see him doing. I’m glad at least Blackburn and Jason are now aware of what’s going on in South Africa, and that Jason is on his way; it sounds like Clay is going to need him. I’m dying to find out what’s going on with Clay, and how he made it out of the water and to the hospital.

The team interaction/rapport in this chapter was fun to read. Loved the detail of Clay helping Jason’s kids with their homework; it’s the kind of thing I could definitely see him doing. I’m glad at least Blackburn and Jason are now aware of what’s going on in South Africa, and that Jason is on his way; it sounds like Clay is going to need him. I’m dying to find out what’s going on with Clay, and how he made it out of the water and to the hospital.
10/17/2020 c51 burnmedown
The way you described the scenery and setting here was lovely and made me wish to visit South Africa. Clay’s continued insecurities about being able to return to Bravo broke my heart a bit, but I loved the support from his brothers and Frank. The rescue of the fishermen was unexpected and incredibly intense, and it was perfect that Clay’s trauma of knowing what it felt like to drown alone drove him to make sure the Captain didn’t suffer the same fate. That was such a Clay way to react. The end of this chapter was a BRUTAL cliffhanger and made me very glad the next one has already been posted!
The way you described the scenery and setting here was lovely and made me wish to visit South Africa. Clay’s continued insecurities about being able to return to Bravo broke my heart a bit, but I loved the support from his brothers and Frank. The rescue of the fishermen was unexpected and incredibly intense, and it was perfect that Clay’s trauma of knowing what it felt like to drown alone drove him to make sure the Captain didn’t suffer the same fate. That was such a Clay way to react. The end of this chapter was a BRUTAL cliffhanger and made me very glad the next one has already been posted!
10/15/2020 c54 Guest
Ahhh no, hope you're feeling better soon xxx
Ahhh no, hope you're feeling better soon xxx
10/11/2020 c54 JeaneneP
Ah I’m sorry to hear you are not well! Best wishes and hope you get better soon!
Ah I’m sorry to hear you are not well! Best wishes and hope you get better soon!