for The Reluctant Hero5/1/2020 c23 
2Thomas Knightshade
I wonder how Ozma will react with another version of himself as well as an uncorrupted form of Salem-his former wife- stuck inside of a stranger's head. Please don't kill off Sienna like in Canon, she's an amazing character.
2Thomas KnightshadeI wonder how Ozma will react with another version of himself as well as an uncorrupted form of Salem-his former wife- stuck inside of a stranger's head. Please don't kill off Sienna like in Canon, she's an amazing character.
4/29/2020 c22 Fuyuki365
Here's hoping that the grim queen doesn't notice John's friends. Also just reread that john was more valued than the relics or maidens[then again it was oz who said it so...] Point is that john will have a story to tell when/if he comes back
Here's hoping that the grim queen doesn't notice John's friends. Also just reread that john was more valued than the relics or maidens[then again it was oz who said it so...] Point is that john will have a story to tell when/if he comes back
4/23/2020 c22 DemonEnded
Great chapter. Young Weiss and Winter are simply adorable, also sienna deserves some headpats for everything she had to put up with. Anyways I hope u update soon cuz that cliffhanger was brutal.
Great chapter. Young Weiss and Winter are simply adorable, also sienna deserves some headpats for everything she had to put up with. Anyways I hope u update soon cuz that cliffhanger was brutal.
4/22/2020 c22 8The Keeper of Worlds
Oh dear heavens above and below...He’s boned, like straight up legit screwed ten ways over to Sunday at this rate.
8The Keeper of WorldsOh dear heavens above and below...He’s boned, like straight up legit screwed ten ways over to Sunday at this rate.
4/20/2020 c22 yeetus deletus
Clang!
A loud noise of metal being bent and twisted interrupted her intrigued words, urging our collective attention to turn towards the only doors that connected the dining room to the rest of the house.
In front of those was a small and slim woman giving us her back for a couple of moments, then she turned and… I felt sweating nervously...
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Priscilla looked angry. Truly a novelty, what a glorious surprise-
"Priscilla you're in the wrong fanfic!"
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*sigh* i dont know why i wrote that
Btw nice chapter cant wait for the next one
Clang!
A loud noise of metal being bent and twisted interrupted her intrigued words, urging our collective attention to turn towards the only doors that connected the dining room to the rest of the house.
In front of those was a small and slim woman giving us her back for a couple of moments, then she turned and… I felt sweating nervously...
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Priscilla looked angry. Truly a novelty, what a glorious surprise-
"Priscilla you're in the wrong fanfic!"
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..
*sigh* i dont know why i wrote that
Btw nice chapter cant wait for the next one
4/18/2020 c22 3Matsuda Macober
Ozpin had once said that Jhon's magic is deeply rooted in his imagination, it would not mean this. that if he imagines his magic as an unbreakable shield similar to the cap vibranium shield.
Should it be created, or if you think of armor, or create thousands of magical abilities from different Universes, what about Fate? for example.
or "mystical" energy abilities such as the Chakra or the Ki, for him to use for defense and attack, the Ki itself can make someone's skin as hard as diamond or even harder.
There are spells in Fate that can make someone that a single blow delivered by magic can destroy even entire buildings or an entire room made of granite, as in the battle of Rin vs Luvia at the end of UBW.
Why he dont use that kind of magic for Example
3Matsuda MacoberOzpin had once said that Jhon's magic is deeply rooted in his imagination, it would not mean this. that if he imagines his magic as an unbreakable shield similar to the cap vibranium shield.
Should it be created, or if you think of armor, or create thousands of magical abilities from different Universes, what about Fate? for example.
or "mystical" energy abilities such as the Chakra or the Ki, for him to use for defense and attack, the Ki itself can make someone's skin as hard as diamond or even harder.
There are spells in Fate that can make someone that a single blow delivered by magic can destroy even entire buildings or an entire room made of granite, as in the battle of Rin vs Luvia at the end of UBW.
Why he dont use that kind of magic for Example
4/17/2020 c22 Fuyuki365
Plus side is that he (probably) still has the tracking device on him...right?
Plus side is that he (probably) still has the tracking device on him...right?
4/17/2020 c22 Ciel Blaze
Why is Hazel here? Didn't the reason he joined Salem was because his sister died? I'm sorry because I didn't watch Rwby after season 3. I only read the fanfic.
Why is Hazel here? Didn't the reason he joined Salem was because his sister died? I'm sorry because I didn't watch Rwby after season 3. I only read the fanfic.
4/17/2020 c22 NazgulBelserion
Fkin weak ass Pepsi wizard I forgot about that I really did hope he got stronger with magic
Fkin weak ass Pepsi wizard I forgot about that I really did hope he got stronger with magic
4/12/2020 c12 GrumpyGrue
Ozpin the convenient scapegoat for a murderous bandit. Divorce guaranteed for kiss-NTR in the same room.
Ozpin the convenient scapegoat for a murderous bandit. Divorce guaranteed for kiss-NTR in the same room.