for Face On the Milk Carton2/5 c64 Gmuench16
This was soooooo good! I loved everything in this book! You did such an amazing job! Thank you for sharing this with us!
This was soooooo good! I loved everything in this book! You did such an amazing job! Thank you for sharing this with us!
9/11/2024 c64 
35SharonH
I loved this. It is well written and fun. The errors that bothered me were few, and previously mentioned so no reason to call them out. Thank you, and I would love to see more.
35SharonHI loved this. It is well written and fun. The errors that bothered me were few, and previously mentioned so no reason to call them out. Thank you, and I would love to see more.
8/11/2024 c64 Whitlock's Lili
I really enjoyed this story immensly. It is now a part of my favs. Just one small hiccup to fix. Some of the names need to be dou le checked. I notived during thr story where a character will have a certain middle or first name and then chapters later the name was change. Like Narcissa's and Theo's middle names and Pansy's father's first name. But those are just small changes. Otherwise, amazing job!
I really enjoyed this story immensly. It is now a part of my favs. Just one small hiccup to fix. Some of the names need to be dou le checked. I notived during thr story where a character will have a certain middle or first name and then chapters later the name was change. Like Narcissa's and Theo's middle names and Pansy's father's first name. But those are just small changes. Otherwise, amazing job!
5/23/2024 c57 Lizard1988
Hermione refers to herself as Hermione Granger and not Malfoy. I’m not sure if was intentional or not but I wanted to let you know. I’m enjoying the story so far.
Hermione refers to herself as Hermione Granger and not Malfoy. I’m not sure if was intentional or not but I wanted to let you know. I’m enjoying the story so far.
4/10/2024 c5 30Bambu
I'm re-reading your story while I recover from surgery, and it's honestly such a nice blend of drama, teen angst and delightful romance. Nonetheless, I wanted to leave a note for this chapter specifically. Narcissa's reaction to Draco and Hermione's bickering at the end of the chapter is so precious! It made me grin. So, thanks for a thoroughly enjoyable revisit to this inventive lttle tangent.
30BambuI'm re-reading your story while I recover from surgery, and it's honestly such a nice blend of drama, teen angst and delightful romance. Nonetheless, I wanted to leave a note for this chapter specifically. Narcissa's reaction to Draco and Hermione's bickering at the end of the chapter is so precious! It made me grin. So, thanks for a thoroughly enjoyable revisit to this inventive lttle tangent.
12/27/2023 c64 40Concolor44
Stunning.
Smashing.
This was a fun ride, to be sure, and I am SO HAPPY Petunia got a chance for reconciliation. That made me misty, it did.
Adding to Favorites.
40Concolor44Stunning.
Smashing.
This was a fun ride, to be sure, and I am SO HAPPY Petunia got a chance for reconciliation. That made me misty, it did.
Adding to Favorites.
12/27/2023 c63 Concolor44
Hahaha! Chop 'im up! Burn 'im down! So much for your so-called immortality, Tom!
Yeah, conjuring Fiendfyre again after all she went through had to be exhausting.
So ... how many DEs did we dispatch here, hmm? Lots? Most of them? All the truly dangerous ones, hopefully? Lestrange better be one of them.
Hahaha! Chop 'im up! Burn 'im down! So much for your so-called immortality, Tom!
Yeah, conjuring Fiendfyre again after all she went through had to be exhausting.
So ... how many DEs did we dispatch here, hmm? Lots? Most of them? All the truly dangerous ones, hopefully? Lestrange better be one of them.
12/26/2023 c62 Concolor44
"Did you think I meant monkeys?"
Heh. Hermione in sarcasm mode makes me grin.
She's going to be awesome as Minister for Magic.
"Did you think I meant monkeys?"
Heh. Hermione in sarcasm mode makes me grin.
She's going to be awesome as Minister for Magic.