
11/7/2019 c25 Calimocho
Oooo another note... the plot thickens.
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
—Liz
Oooo another note... the plot thickens.
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
—Liz
11/7/2019 c25
3Charlee56
Sirius os patting Hermipne's LEG?
Uhhh, I don't mean to be a wet blanket here, but does anyone else out here understand the import of such an act with a nubile and slightly sexually active young woman of about 16 y/o?
Kinda makes a "statement" such as. "Ohh, I REALLY like petting your hot little leg! Next thing I want to do is run my hands through your lovely hair and grab me a handful all while exposing your neck"!
In a man not related very closely by blood in the first degree, this just seems to me to send the wrong message. A bit hot, yes. But wrong.
Although Sirius isn't making any 'moves' more serious than these pets and pats, still in all something's gotta give here.

Sirius os patting Hermipne's LEG?
Uhhh, I don't mean to be a wet blanket here, but does anyone else out here understand the import of such an act with a nubile and slightly sexually active young woman of about 16 y/o?
Kinda makes a "statement" such as. "Ohh, I REALLY like petting your hot little leg! Next thing I want to do is run my hands through your lovely hair and grab me a handful all while exposing your neck"!
In a man not related very closely by blood in the first degree, this just seems to me to send the wrong message. A bit hot, yes. But wrong.
Although Sirius isn't making any 'moves' more serious than these pets and pats, still in all something's gotta give here.
11/7/2019 c25
4crity2re
Beautiful updatesthis chapter and the last! Perfect amount of hanky pankyand I was thinking the whole time that they didn't close the door... I was so glad when Harry walked in to be right! But Hermione's response (and Theo's too) was perfect. Looking forward to the next chapter (and the next encounter with Ginny!)

Beautiful updatesthis chapter and the last! Perfect amount of hanky pankyand I was thinking the whole time that they didn't close the door... I was so glad when Harry walked in to be right! But Hermione's response (and Theo's too) was perfect. Looking forward to the next chapter (and the next encounter with Ginny!)
11/7/2019 c25
32Lady Sloane
Good chapter. I hope whoever is sending the letters gets caught and it doesn't further interrupt their holidays. Looking forward to your next update!

Good chapter. I hope whoever is sending the letters gets caught and it doesn't further interrupt their holidays. Looking forward to your next update!
11/7/2019 c25
21CallaRose4ever
That was a good chapter. looking forward to more as usual. Glad the Aurors know about the letters now. I thought it was several threatening letters and not just one. That is why I didn't understand why she didn't tell them about it. So glad Sirius is free and clear. He is one of my favorites.

That was a good chapter. looking forward to more as usual. Glad the Aurors know about the letters now. I thought it was several threatening letters and not just one. That is why I didn't understand why she didn't tell them about it. So glad Sirius is free and clear. He is one of my favorites.
11/4/2019 c10 MarieGT18
Really enjoying the story, But I think there were some formatting errors in this chapter. Several of the paragraphs had random breaks in the lines making a new paragraph and making it semi-difficult to read. Can't wait to finish up what you've written so far.
Really enjoying the story, But I think there were some formatting errors in this chapter. Several of the paragraphs had random breaks in the lines making a new paragraph and making it semi-difficult to read. Can't wait to finish up what you've written so far.
11/1/2019 c24 Guest
I really enjoy this chapter, it was sweet and sexy
I really enjoy this chapter, it was sweet and sexy