9/25/2019 c18 GMGaby
Essence? Ohhhhh fine trust Theo, but that girl seems trouble, she seemed a bit too friendly.
And Harry running hot and cold with Tracey? And now with Ginny?
Ron is such an annoying character. Someone really needs to put him on his place.
Great chapter!
Essence? Ohhhhh fine trust Theo, but that girl seems trouble, she seemed a bit too friendly.
And Harry running hot and cold with Tracey? And now with Ginny?
Ron is such an annoying character. Someone really needs to put him on his place.
Great chapter!
9/25/2019 c19 4crity2re
Love! Knew Harry was on a love potion, but two more? Oooo! Wonder if the potion was a way to split Hermione and Theo, so she'd take the bracelet off? Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for not making it a major cliffhanger!
Love! Knew Harry was on a love potion, but two more? Oooo! Wonder if the potion was a way to split Hermione and Theo, so she'd take the bracelet off? Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for not making it a major cliffhanger!
9/25/2019 c19 ReaderRabid2
Boo! I’m curious to learn more details of the plot and if it’s related to the original kidnapping.
Boo! I’m curious to learn more details of the plot and if it’s related to the original kidnapping.
9/22/2019 c18 3Charlee56
Nicely done. A grwat filler chapter, good action in the stands and now Hermione has a rival for Theo's affections.
Plus! He's been WARMED by Sirius (who was being SERIOUS!), Lucius as well as Harry!
Nicely done. A grwat filler chapter, good action in the stands and now Hermione has a rival for Theo's affections.
Plus! He's been WARMED by Sirius (who was being SERIOUS!), Lucius as well as Harry!
9/22/2019 c18 1Chantal9
Oh, Theo...you foolish foolish guy! Could he be any more oblivious? Hermione shouldn't let that get too far out of hand...maybe ask Draco what he thinks from a guy's p.o.v., esp a guy who probably knows Theo the best and who definitely loves his sister best of all. That is going to become a serious problem for them both if they don't communicate and fix things...Hermione has a Quidditch team worth of men who will be after Theo's wellbeing (to put it nicely!) if he hurts her, intentionally or not!
And what about these threatening letters? Has Hermione showed them to anyone? It seems rather irresponsible to ignore them based on her varied history of hate mail and threats for alleged discretions over the years. I have a feeling she's going to regret that decision.
I love Hermione's first interaction with Luna! Ginny seems to be a real leech on their group of friends, trying to suck the life out of their happiness and camaraderie. It's really a shame the youngest Weasleys are letting their insecurities and envy get in the way of being a part of this newly formed tight knit group of friends and family. I hope they don't do anything that they can't take back.
Oh, Theo...you foolish foolish guy! Could he be any more oblivious? Hermione shouldn't let that get too far out of hand...maybe ask Draco what he thinks from a guy's p.o.v., esp a guy who probably knows Theo the best and who definitely loves his sister best of all. That is going to become a serious problem for them both if they don't communicate and fix things...Hermione has a Quidditch team worth of men who will be after Theo's wellbeing (to put it nicely!) if he hurts her, intentionally or not!
And what about these threatening letters? Has Hermione showed them to anyone? It seems rather irresponsible to ignore them based on her varied history of hate mail and threats for alleged discretions over the years. I have a feeling she's going to regret that decision.
I love Hermione's first interaction with Luna! Ginny seems to be a real leech on their group of friends, trying to suck the life out of their happiness and camaraderie. It's really a shame the youngest Weasleys are letting their insecurities and envy get in the way of being a part of this newly formed tight knit group of friends and family. I hope they don't do anything that they can't take back.
9/22/2019 c18 Banshee Black
"Hermione realized that while she could trust Theo, she probably shouldn't trust Broadmoor too much."
Indeed, and remember she's a Malfoy when the time comes to set her straight...
"Hermione realized that while she could trust Theo, she probably shouldn't trust Broadmoor too much."
Indeed, and remember she's a Malfoy when the time comes to set her straight...
9/22/2019 c18 MotekElm
great chapter. I'm afraid this is a hint that Ginny has managed to potion Harry into seeing her
great chapter. I'm afraid this is a hint that Ginny has managed to potion Harry into seeing her