
9/12/2019 c1 Guest
this Harry is OOC , he was mad with ron because he was a jeolous moron before the dragon, and then accept him back b/c his low steem and afraid of being alone, same with hermione. tho i like viktor support.
this Harry is OOC , he was mad with ron because he was a jeolous moron before the dragon, and then accept him back b/c his low steem and afraid of being alone, same with hermione. tho i like viktor support.
9/11/2019 c16 Banshee Black
"I was addressing Miss Malfoy. You two hooligans barely count as one adult when combined."
Go Augusta !
"Please, Sirius is far more likely to offer pointers than be upset."
Which would back up Augusta's sentiment.
Ginny is a menace who needs to be dealt with. The sooner the better.
"I was addressing Miss Malfoy. You two hooligans barely count as one adult when combined."
Go Augusta !
"Please, Sirius is far more likely to offer pointers than be upset."
Which would back up Augusta's sentiment.
Ginny is a menace who needs to be dealt with. The sooner the better.
9/11/2019 c16
1bale626
I don’t usually post reviews, but I feel the need here, just for a simple request from a humble reader. I would respectfully ask that you not pair Harry with Ginny. Especially when there is a literal “buffet” of gals in the Potter-verse he could be paired with. Obviously, you as the author could ignore me entirely. But I just thought I’d throw this out there, especially as I’m thoroughly enjoying the story thus far.

I don’t usually post reviews, but I feel the need here, just for a simple request from a humble reader. I would respectfully ask that you not pair Harry with Ginny. Especially when there is a literal “buffet” of gals in the Potter-verse he could be paired with. Obviously, you as the author could ignore me entirely. But I just thought I’d throw this out there, especially as I’m thoroughly enjoying the story thus far.
9/11/2019 c16 GMGaby
Sirius offering pointers is a very likely scenario.
For Ginny I have no words, the money grabbing mentality is sickening, and she is still a teen.
I hope somebody slips her some potion and she babbles all her inner thoughts so no other boy falls for her.
Great chapter
Sirius offering pointers is a very likely scenario.
For Ginny I have no words, the money grabbing mentality is sickening, and she is still a teen.
I hope somebody slips her some potion and she babbles all her inner thoughts so no other boy falls for her.
Great chapter
9/11/2019 c16
5BeachGirl114
Ginny not the brightest. She really can not see he is not interested in her. I have a feeling he is into Tracy Davis or one of the other girls

Ginny not the brightest. She really can not see he is not interested in her. I have a feeling he is into Tracy Davis or one of the other girls
9/11/2019 c16
4crity2re
So wonderful! I'm so excited for more. I've never read a story like this, and I've just binged the whole thing! You've got a real gift, merging your story with the events of the books. Really well done!

So wonderful! I'm so excited for more. I've never read a story like this, and I've just binged the whole thing! You've got a real gift, merging your story with the events of the books. Really well done!
9/8/2019 c15
10jamcreynolds
Ive finally caught up and I love where youre going with this story! Cant wait to read more. Thank you for posting.

Ive finally caught up and I love where youre going with this story! Cant wait to read more. Thank you for posting.
9/8/2019 c15
3Karatekid-Ninja
Loved it! I love when they stand up to old Dumbledore! Simply brilliant chapter and I can’t wait for more xx

Loved it! I love when they stand up to old Dumbledore! Simply brilliant chapter and I can’t wait for more xx