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6/9/2019 c2 GMGaby
Interesting, Narcissa’s thoughts made me I wonder if Lucius joined the Death Eaters in an effort to find Celeste, maybe Riddle promised him results?.
The Grangers were cold and so nonchalant about buying a baby. Now that they are out of the way the Malfoys will have uninterrupted time with her.
Ron’s behavior was in line with how he comported himself in canon.
Can’t wait to read more.
Thanks
6/9/2019 c2 1Someguy the anon
wow. i... I don't think I've seen a version of the Granger 's so cold. Like usually a "Granger-bash" could be seen be as reasonable from looking at it from a different angle, either being like "this place is dangerous your LEAVING" or "you need to go to a REAL school Hermione, something to help you get a job in n the future" not "we bought a kid because a kid was trendy at the time"
6/8/2019 c2 Guest
“The Face on the Milk Carton” was one of my favorite series when I was a kid, so this story naturally tugs at my heart strings. For some reason, during the first chapter I assumed Hermione would be Theo’s sister, but I guess the Malfoys make sense...although, why does she look so different from them? Did whoever imperiused the squib to kidnap her somehow charm her to have a different appearance? And as for Lucius, Hermione did bring up that she spent a large part of her second year petrified by a basilisk, but I hope she brings up more clearly that that ONLY HAPPENED because Lucius had a grudge against Arthur Weasley, tried to get him fired, and didn’t care that muggle-born children would be hurt or even killed in the process. Because while Dumbledore makes it clear to Harry that Lucius didn’t know the diary was a horcrux, he DID know that it was dark magic given to him by the Dark Lord and that it was a weapon against Muggle-borns. So he could have very easily murdered his own daughter if he hadn’t had a mirror with her. And she should also make it clear that obviously the pureblood/Muggle-born thing is bull short because obviously Slytherin’s Monster has no clue she was a pureblood!

As for Harry:
“He pulled out parchment and wrote Sirius about everything happening, mentioning briefly he sometimes wished he could talk his godfather directly. In the end he felt better, though no closer to a solution. He woke Hedwig and sent the letter before he could talk himself out of it.”

Hermione hit the nail on the head when she told him exactly what he was going to do, seeing as he’d done it many times before...but I’m really hoping that because he wrote to Sirius of all people, he’ll come around. After Pettigrew, Sirius of all people knows things importance of loyalty to your friends. He would NOT like a friend who is disloyal and betrays his godson (basically: Ron) and he would probably not like Harry to do the betraying himself. Besides, Sirius knows what it’s like to have dark parents with racist views. He wouldn’t hate Hermione for something she can’t help.
6/8/2019 c2 2LexieSong
Ohhh can’t believe the Grangers! So heartless!
6/8/2019 c2 ellarandre
This seems to be an interesting story!
And your writing makes me want to read more, thank you for posting it, great job!
6/8/2019 c2 34kelpie169
Awwwwww sweet daddy!Lucius is just the bestest ever! *le sigh* oh and can *I* use my own mob mentality on the Grangers cause uh fuck no! Bitches..
6/7/2019 c1 6merlin101
I like this, it's rare to find a pureblood Hermione story where she doesn't belong to one of the main death eater families.
I hope you continue the series.
6/6/2019 c1 2NatRose17
I really like the story and the background it's fenomenal, but I personally found the pairing disgusting. You pretend that after all the bullying and derogatory terms Malfoy used against Hermione just for blood prejudice she's going to fall for him? For me it's illogic, especially when you intend in change Harry's perspective of a healthy friendship.
pd: just my opinion, i would prefer Nott for Hermione
6/5/2019 c1 kamarieee
Okay so I definitely hate following WIPs, but I’ve wanted to see this story line written for AGES and you are very well written! Can’t wait to see how this develops, and I hope you have a lot in store for me to read
6/5/2019 c1 Minniemousemom
Really great story! I truly love it.
6/5/2019 c1 8EliMorgana
Eeeep! I'm so excited about this story! Love love love!
6/5/2019 c1 Emar
Intriguing start! I look forward to the reunion with her parents. I can’t even imagine how they must feel.
6/5/2019 c1 Msmalloryreads
Oh, I love this.
6/5/2019 c1 cozybits
I am so very excited for this! I loved the first chapter!
6/5/2019 c1 10brady66
Great chapter! I hope Harry changes his mind and sides with Hermione over Ron. It's disgusting how they are treating her when she is going thru this.

Just a little advise - you might want to tag the main characters in your story in the description so when people are searching they can find this...and who the pairing is.
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