for Face On the Milk Carton12/10/2019 c30 annieharp84
Hi love your story. I think you should recheck your last chapter the font is all squished together
Hi love your story. I think you should recheck your last chapter the font is all squished together
12/10/2019 c30 MannysBookDragon
You might need to repost this. It looks more like coding with a bit of story in it lol
You might need to repost this. It looks more like coding with a bit of story in it lol
12/8/2019 c29 
3Karatekid-Ninja
Brilliant as always! I love the general intersection Hermione has with other characters. Great job and I can’t wait for more xx
3Karatekid-NinjaBrilliant as always! I love the general intersection Hermione has with other characters. Great job and I can’t wait for more xx
12/8/2019 c29 3Charlee56
I think this time a trap for Umbridge...
Hete's my suggestion: When she starts to try and break into the Room of Requirement, all the students kip off via specially pre-set exits directly into their own Common Rooms, which after their use then disappear.
Umbridge, Filch and minus her Toady Squad try to break in and in doing so, trigger the trap. They are caught in a Wizard's Trap; a cage whose bars dampen all magic of the trapped and render them as Squibs.
Leaving the both of them there for a few days with only a constantly refilling jug of water and a slops pail oughtta teach them both a thng or three. And it will certainly teach Umbridge the limits of her "power".
3Charlee56I think this time a trap for Umbridge...
Hete's my suggestion: When she starts to try and break into the Room of Requirement, all the students kip off via specially pre-set exits directly into their own Common Rooms, which after their use then disappear.
Umbridge, Filch and minus her Toady Squad try to break in and in doing so, trigger the trap. They are caught in a Wizard's Trap; a cage whose bars dampen all magic of the trapped and render them as Squibs.
Leaving the both of them there for a few days with only a constantly refilling jug of water and a slops pail oughtta teach them both a thng or three. And it will certainly teach Umbridge the limits of her "power".
12/8/2019 c29 Royan Granger-Nott
I like how you wrote the scene with Theo’s father. And now there is more underground movement.. I like it. When will Umbridge get her comeuppance?
I like how you wrote the scene with Theo’s father. And now there is more underground movement.. I like it. When will Umbridge get her comeuppance?
12/5/2019 c1 TRexContemplates
Probably been brought up before but milk in Britain is mainly sold in glass or plastic bottles? Same in 1994 & British wizarding world probably uses glass exclusively.
Missing children's photos have been tried a few times year 2000 & after as experiment. Only one that stands out is Lee Boxall (vanished 1988) as he was from local area.
A little research or britpicking would have brung this info to light. Many Brit's get irate with such basic mistakes - I don't. I just politely pass any details lacking.
Wizarding Britain & Europe probably has much more efficient ways of circulating a child's photo?
Still I enjoy premise of this fic & will indulge later on when on my three our train journey home.
Probably been brought up before but milk in Britain is mainly sold in glass or plastic bottles? Same in 1994 & British wizarding world probably uses glass exclusively.
Missing children's photos have been tried a few times year 2000 & after as experiment. Only one that stands out is Lee Boxall (vanished 1988) as he was from local area.
A little research or britpicking would have brung this info to light. Many Brit's get irate with such basic mistakes - I don't. I just politely pass any details lacking.
Wizarding Britain & Europe probably has much more efficient ways of circulating a child's photo?
Still I enjoy premise of this fic & will indulge later on when on my three our train journey home.
12/5/2019 c2 The Jabberwock of OZ
Geezus
I don't know where this will go, but DANG did you make The Grangers into 100% shite tier parents.
I do like that the Malfoys are trying to make her feel welcome though.
Geezus
I don't know where this will go, but DANG did you make The Grangers into 100% shite tier parents.
I do like that the Malfoys are trying to make her feel welcome though.
12/5/2019 c29 Fast Frank
Very good, as per usual.
Very good, as per usual.