for A Miracle Over The Endless Road2/11 c6 Rosco Peeko Trane
I've been thoroughly entertained thus far. And I'm extremely picky on what I like to read.
Great integration of Archer into the world. Great characterization. Great dialogue. All around a fantastic read.
I hope to see more of this someday. In the meantime Imma check out what else you've written.
I've been thoroughly entertained thus far. And I'm extremely picky on what I like to read.
Great integration of Archer into the world. Great characterization. Great dialogue. All around a fantastic read.
I hope to see more of this someday. In the meantime Imma check out what else you've written.
8/24/2020 c6 ShotLock22
Just wanna say that I’m really enjoying your story and I’m excited to see what happens next
Just wanna say that I’m really enjoying your story and I’m excited to see what happens next
7/2/2020 c6 MetalBatt
While I felt that the actual classroom scene felt well done, the scene right after kind of felt a bit off. Almost like it wasn't meant to be there. Not that I didn't enjoy it, but maybe a bit of story structure might have made the chapter run by a little smoothly. That said, Archer is awesome! The way he just told Jaune to "git gud scrub" felt really on point with his character. He's only teaching those that have an affinity in battle, and won't hold their hand along the way. This ain't no dick measuring contest, they either get their shit straight or they ain't shit. Archer is really going to change some of these kids for the better.
While I felt that the actual classroom scene felt well done, the scene right after kind of felt a bit off. Almost like it wasn't meant to be there. Not that I didn't enjoy it, but maybe a bit of story structure might have made the chapter run by a little smoothly. That said, Archer is awesome! The way he just told Jaune to "git gud scrub" felt really on point with his character. He's only teaching those that have an affinity in battle, and won't hold their hand along the way. This ain't no dick measuring contest, they either get their shit straight or they ain't shit. Archer is really going to change some of these kids for the better.
6/18/2020 c6 2theMoon
this was satisfying to read. this is just what id expect archer and the land of remnant would react to one another.
Although its a shame your update schedule is slow and infrequent...
this was satisfying to read. this is just what id expect archer and the land of remnant would react to one another.
Although its a shame your update schedule is slow and infrequent...
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